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Constance's 'One Beautiful Line Contest' ~ February 27, 2025

Each morning brings with it the light of hope. ~ by poet Stunningly serene, the blush of Dawn as she awakens.

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Terry Miller

Date: 3/3/2025 2:09:00 AM

A great line, congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2025 3:13:00 PM

Back with congrats. I love reviewing winners of super short poetry

Crystol Woods

Date: 3/2/2025 8:56:00 AM

Hum as "she" awakens... meaning the Dawn since it's capitalized? Yep! Beautiful! Xo

Lin Lane
Date: 3/2/2025 9:13:00 AM

I usually write about Dawn, the Sun and the Moon in personified verses, so I capitalize them as if they were their proper names. Thanks, Crystol.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2025 2:17:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Lin :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 3/2/2025 9:13:00 AM

Thanks so very much, Anne-Lise.

Karen Jones

Date: 3/1/2025 8:56:00 PM

Congrats dear Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2025 10:20:00 PM

Thank you, my kind friend.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/1/2025 6:39:00 AM

Lin, I think a connection exists between love of nature and longing for peaceful relationships too. There's a feeling that comes from both that shares something in common. The picture you used here and words match really well.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2025 6:48:00 AM

Thank you so much for your thoughts, Duke. You know I appreciate you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2025 10:18:00 PM

Love this. And the picture too

Lin Lane
Date: 3/1/2025 6:47:00 AM

Thanks on Both counts, Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/27/2025 12:44:00 PM

picture perfect Lin!! hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 2/27/2025 1:04:00 PM

I thought so,too. It was too good not to use. Thanks, Jan!

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/27/2025 12:14:00 PM

And said like a true poet Lin, plus you have found the perfect picture for this piece, you certainly nailed the (one beautiful line) theme, no easy task with only 14 syllables, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 2/27/2025 1:03:00 PM

Thank you, David. I learned to condense my thoughts from writing Monoku. You had something to do with that. ;-) sometimes half the fun of posting is finding an image that conveys what our words do not or cannot.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/27/2025 11:39:00 AM

The best time of day Lin, like you I'm usually up before she rises. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 2/27/2025 12:59:00 PM

We see such beautiful scenes of nature as sunrise is born each day. Thanks Tom.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/27/2025 10:29:00 AM

- Beautiful, Lin :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 2/27/2025 12:57:00 PM

Thanks very much, Anne-Lise. ;-)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/27/2025 9:37:00 AM

Dear Lin, Wow, the picture is beautiful and the one liner fits it all so beautifully well! Now that is what I like to wake up to! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 2/27/2025 12:57:00 PM

Thanks, Daniel. I always look for a picture after writing a poem and this one had to be perfect with so few words to use.