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Blue Sleeping Gown

Under a trembling Dark shadow of pain I am gathering Cloud and cloud again   From the lost ocean From the gone river Is my collection From the spent shiver   In the dried petals In the closed chapters Sit those pink signals Debris of copters   From clouds I collect I look for some rain That would resurrect The bird in my vein   Let the cloud break down Let the pain-ice melt Let blue sleeping gown Get the breath I felt __________________________ 23 August 2016 For ‘Five Rhyming Stanza’s-5-only – Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Date: 8/30/2016 11:55:00 PM
great write Probir, loved the "bird in my vein" line, so nice.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/31/2016 6:41:00 AM
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Date: 8/29/2016 4:57:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely write ~
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/30/2016 3:54:00 AM
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Date: 8/29/2016 12:50:00 PM
Hi Probir, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 3rd place win:-) Alexis
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/30/2016 3:54:00 AM
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Date: 8/23/2016 12:38:00 PM
Hi Probir, I enjoyed your take on the contest theme. I wish you the best of luck in the contest: -) Alexis
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/24/2016 11:04:00 AM
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Date: 8/23/2016 7:15:00 AM
Lovely. Good luck with the contest.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/23/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Agnes ...
Date: 8/23/2016 5:49:00 AM
Very appealing Stanzas that convey well the spirit of your wish dear, Probir! Good luck my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/23/2016 9:04:00 AM
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