Blue Sea Kisses

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Written July 23, 2016

Poetry/Etheree/Blue Sea Kisses
Copyright Protected, ID 02-1623-829-16
All Rights Reserved, 2016, Constance La France

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A day as clear as wine, no clouds in sight. Oh_ s e r e n i t y, is the cool summer wind, the sweet air smells of the sea. This beach such a vast open space. Like jagged spears white birds streak the sky and the blue sea k i s s e s - my painted toes. E T H E R E E

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/16/2024 2:55:00 PM

as I read your Etheree, I felt like I was on the beach observing the vastness of the deep blue sea. I loved the spacing on the word 'kisses'--perfect. I agree, s e r e n i t y, is the cool summer wind. Your poem was delicate and beautifully constructed. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 2/16/2024 3:17:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the wonderful comment, and compliment, hugs, Constance