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In a night dream, I dreamt of a magical creature; a dolphin- who appeared in a moon beam, and I wished a secret wish . . . O, please take me on a wild deep blue ocean quest, underwater he dove with me tightly pressed; soon, we were skimming rolling waves obsessed . . . O, what a team ~ Nine friends joined in, from under the blue we would leap; flying, flying we would twirl, whirl and spin, then, back into the ocean deep . . . Gliding- soon we arrived at an island lagoon, their happy voices a chirping musical tune; we rested tranquil in the cool under the moon . . . 'till time to begin ~ We journeyed far, like free spirits with no shore; following a bright blinking northern star, and down we dove to explore . . . Beautiful silent things hidden below the waves, and a labyrinth of turquoise blue ocean caves; and sadly, even ship wreck graves . . . . We whirled bizarre ~ I woke shivering, so cold- I pulled my covers tight. O, why can I not stop this wild quivering; then, faint his chirp drifts in the night ~ _______________________________ August 6, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Blue Ocean Quest Copyright Protected, ID 19-1171-267-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, 'Devotion to the Ocean' sponsor, Chantelle Anne Cook First Place

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Date: 8/17/2019 8:37:00 PM
A magical write, Constance! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/16/2019 9:49:00 AM
Beautiful write Constance, dolphins are my fave animal, and your escapade with them was so appealing! Congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 8/16/2019 3:28:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful win, D.H. .... should have been placed at the top of the list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/15/2019 11:30:00 PM
I love the fantasy woven with your words. A well deserved win with this cute poem.
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Date: 8/15/2019 9:45:00 PM
your write made me think of your dancing group dancing in grace. Congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs
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Date: 8/15/2019 3:48:00 PM
Wow Constance, this so beautiful! Enchantment of the ocean, including mermaids and beautiful creatures of the sea. Congratulations on your deserving First Placement! I loved it! : ) xxoo
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