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Blue Night

Night’s sky is a lapis slate. Were its moon alive, glacial would be its breath. As I stand on this cliff, ocean's indigo splashing my face, I imagine the sparkle of your periwinkle eyes before your lips first fell on mine. My fingers clasp your gift to me - the sapphire at my throat. I envision us both like before - laughing beneath a cerulean sky. Sky no longer smiles; I let myself fall forward into the water’s cobalt depths. Submitted Oct. 31, 2021 For Mystic Rose Rose's Blue Contest

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Date: 8/14/2018 7:21:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. I love the first line, beautiful image.
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Date: 8/7/2018 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win. :)
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Date: 8/5/2018 3:38:00 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your top win Andrea.
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Date: 8/5/2018 3:28:00 PM
I remember this blue beauty Andrea. Congratulations on your top win! : )
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Date: 8/5/2018 12:14:00 PM
More congrats <3
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Date: 8/5/2018 11:38:00 AM
Bravo Andrea, well deserved...
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Date: 8/5/2018 10:54:00 AM
LOVE the imagery! Beautifully expressed sweet lady :) Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your top placement. :)-luloo
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Date: 7/28/2018 8:34:00 AM
Lost love, such a tragedy. Beautiful use of words Andrea, lovely imagery.
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Date: 7/22/2018 5:25:00 PM
I am happy to see this at the top of the list Andrea. Congrats! Both of our entries didn't make Dale's short list. This will get read more now. xxoo
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Date: 7/20/2018 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Beautiful but tragic poem with great imagery. :)
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Date: 7/20/2018 9:32:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your well written poem. The content and imagery is just beautiful. Have a nice weekend. :) Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/19/2018 1:11:00 PM
Lovely writ! We found our way to a winners' circle, yay! Congrats dear poetess, xomo
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Date: 7/19/2018 12:00:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, lapis in Spanish means pencil I wonder if there is any resmblence the way you use that word
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Date: 7/19/2018 1:29:00 AM
Coming back to congratulate, Andrea on your great win again.
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Date: 7/17/2018 3:08:00 PM
So touching and tragic and evocative!
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Date: 7/16/2018 1:04:00 PM
Oh this is so sad and strong. Blue to the depths of its chilling tale.. well done!
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Date: 7/16/2018 10:26:00 AM
Love your blue poem, Andrea, fits so well with the entire theme of the subject..
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Date: 7/16/2018 3:32:00 AM
Well written Andrea, so much in a few lines, without doubt brevity in blue. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 7/16/2018 3:05:00 AM
Great blue imagery, Andrea.
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Date: 7/16/2018 2:56:00 AM
... really blue, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/15/2018 9:40:00 PM
Oh wow!! Amazing write. Luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/15/2018 9:24:00 PM
Beautifully sad with great imagery and emotion.
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Date: 7/15/2018 7:40:00 PM
A lovely romantic poem with a sad ending. I think Dale may really like this gem Andrea. I was wondering what you would do to stand out! A great entry! : )
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Date: 7/15/2018 5:01:00 PM
Beautiful colors and imagery..I was having a great time reading your romantic journey through the blue night..didn't expect the ending. Enjoyed reading..to me this is a sure win, Andrea.
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:48:00 PM
It feels so good to be reading your beautiful poems..Love the tragic ending in the depths of cobalt waters.Definitely describes blue poetry...Loved it.
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