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blue jay - trumpet

a wintry trumpet bright blue jay on a bare limb- a winter cold sky ___________________________ May 9, 2020 Poetry/Haiku/trumpet Copyright Protected, ID 20-1249-961-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest Haiku - Blue Jay sponsor, Tania Kitchin First Place

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Date: 5/15/2020 11:20:00 AM
I get nice warm, wintry feelings in this moment. Amazing. Congratulations.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/17/2020 9:50:00 AM
Reason, thanks for the visit and congratulations _Constance
Date: 5/15/2020 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Constance, I can see it, but I'm happy it's spring skies now. xomo
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Date: 5/17/2020 9:51:00 AM
Maureen or should I say Pigeon, thanks for the congratulations and comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 5/15/2020 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations. Beautiful. —MDJ
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Date: 5/15/2020 8:40:00 AM
MD, thanks for the compliment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 5/15/2020 4:40:00 AM
Constance, congrats for the top win.
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Date: 5/15/2020 8:41:00 AM
Mohan, thanks for the congrats _Constance
Date: 5/14/2020 5:36:00 PM
such lovely description Constance, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/15/2020 8:41:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the compliment, congratulations and hugs _Constance
Date: 5/14/2020 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations and kudos on your first place win, Constance - vivid as the blue of the blue jay.
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Date: 5/14/2020 5:20:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the congratulations and visit _Constance
Date: 5/14/2020 3:31:00 PM
Beautiful haiku and a top win DH, Congrats..
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Date: 5/14/2020 5:20:00 PM
Joseph, thanks for the beautiful and congrats _Constance
Date: 5/14/2020 2:35:00 PM
Constance congratulations on your first place win in the contest with your beautiful haiku with vivid imagery!
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Date: 5/14/2020 5:21:00 PM
Tania, thanks so much for the contest and my placement, appreciate _Constance
Date: 5/14/2020 12:19:00 PM
'Congratulations on your win. You captured a raucous trumpet perfectly. David'
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Constance La France
Date: 5/14/2020 5:22:00 PM
David, thanks for the congratulations, they do make a loud noise for sure _Constance
Date: 5/14/2020 12:16:00 PM
Nice use of a trumpet to describe the throaty blue jay in winter. Well done, and congrats on your top placement, my friend. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 5/14/2020 5:23:00 PM
John, thanks for the congrats and for the nice comment on my poem _Constance
Date: 5/14/2020 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your top placement Constance! This one is excellent :)
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Date: 5/14/2020 5:23:00 PM
Aditi, thanks for the congratulations and compliment _Constance
Date: 5/14/2020 9:22:00 AM
brilliant Haiku, I can feel the cold breeze of winter as I listen to that lonely blue jay. Great poem
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Date: 5/14/2020 5:24:00 PM
Mark, thanks for the brilliant and the nice comment _Constance
Date: 5/9/2020 4:38:00 PM
Excellent Constance...
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Date: 5/10/2020 9:27:00 AM
Charlie, thanks for visiting with the excellent _Constance