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Blue eyes that mesmerize And share same thoughts with me, Within their graceful beauty, contain the sea. © Connie Marcum Wong Through Your Eyes - Poetry Contest By Nette Onclaud June 11, 2015 Visual 4 Number of words 17

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Robert Lindley

Date: 10/22/2015 8:36:00 AM

MY WIFE LOVES MY BLUE EYES AND TELLS ME SO OFTEN. Great poem my friend. A7

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 10/22/2015 9:47:00 PM

I have blue eyes too and only my son got my blue eyes. Thanks, Robert

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/20/2015 8:12:00 PM

So nice to read your writing this evening, thank you. Light & Love

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/19/2015 6:31:00 AM

What a beautiful image Connie ;) I really love this one.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/19/2015 12:40:00 PM

Thank you very much Wilma. Hugs, Connie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/17/2015 5:14:00 PM

I wonder why so few have blue or green eyes? Light & Love

Daver Austin

Date: 6/17/2015 1:07:00 PM

Yes, the sea opens up a wealth of imagination in those blue eyes. Love it. Love, daver

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/19/2015 12:56:00 PM

Thank you Daver. I appreciate your sweet comment. Hugs, Connie

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/14/2015 8:43:00 AM

Wow short yet so much said and oh so meaningful..love this Connie

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 5:36:00 PM

Thank you very much Harry! Hugs, Connie

David Fisher

Date: 6/13/2015 8:47:00 PM

Nicely written and love how the ending fits so well with the theme.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 5:38:00 PM

Thank you very much David. I appreciate your comment. Mahalo, Connie

James Fraser

Date: 6/13/2015 11:09:00 AM

So had to read this as I have blue eyes, and it's so lovely that my eyes have been used in another poets poem on the Soup. Love this Connie, it's incredibly warm, hugs, James :) :)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 5:39:00 PM

I too have ocean colored eyes James, and my son got my eyes his wife loves so much. Mahalo, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2015 11:47:00 PM

yes you were right. Glad I saw your poem. Guess what? I did FOUR poems since yesterday, so I can have next week's poems lined up and ready to go!!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 5:43:00 PM

Well, I see your entry justgot POTD. Glad to see it celebrated Andrea. I posted this short poem before my rain poem, but should have put this first for reasons you well understand. XXXOO

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/12/2015 9:57:00 PM

Oh that is a vivid description! nicely done!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 5:44:00 PM

THANK YOU Casarah. Hugs, Connie

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/12/2015 3:35:00 PM

Very sweet, Connie. I am partial to blue eyes! :) Good luck in the contest....Hugs

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 5:47:00 PM

My eyes are the color of the ocean, probably because my mother's eyes were green. Thank you Eileen. Hugs, Connie

Paul Callus

Date: 6/12/2015 2:13:00 PM

Short, yet beautiful, especially the final line! A delightful poem, Connie. gl in contest. hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 5:34:00 PM

Thank you Paul. I have blue eyes as does my son. They are the color of the ocean, probably because my mother's eyes were green.

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/12/2015 1:35:00 PM

Nicely structured, well written with poetic flare. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 5:49:00 PM

Thank you Emile. I always try to read your poetry when I visit PS because it inspires me. Your rhyme is simply sublime! Hugs, Connie

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 6/12/2015 9:07:00 AM

Superb dear friend. The sea like depths of beautiful blue eyes can charm anyone. Excellent Poem with a sweet and cool Blue eye picks. A7 for for this cool Poem. My good wishes for your contest dear friend Connie. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 5:52:00 PM

Thank you very much Ravindra. My eyes are blue, ocean blue. My mother's eyes were green, my father's blue. Blessings, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/12/2015 8:19:00 AM

- A wonderful gem,Connie !- Good luck in contest - I wish you a blessed weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 5:53:00 PM

Thank you dear Anne Lise. You have a lovely week too. Mahalo, Connie

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/12/2015 8:18:00 AM

Great short poem. A joy to read. Best of luck in the comp.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 5:54:00 PM

I appreciate your comment Scott. Mahalo, Connie

John Lawless

Date: 6/12/2015 7:21:00 AM

Thus the romantics description of "deep limpid pools of blue". Very well done Connie

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 6:02:00 PM

Thank you John. This blue eyed gal appreciates your sweet comment. Mahalo, Connie

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/12/2015 3:11:00 AM

What a fabulous write, well penned....good luck in the contest.....A.M.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 6:20:00 PM

Oh, thank you so much Afolabi. Blessings, Connie

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/12/2015 2:39:00 AM

exquisite Connie gl in contest hugs

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/16/2015 6:22:00 PM

Thank you Shadow. I have blue eyes. I tried to reflect through my expression, the heart shaped eye in the picture. Hugs, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2015 12:09:00 AM

connie, I must have read the contest wrong. I thought she asked for 25 lines or something like that. Anyway, I LOVE this. It's also the picture that appealed to ME. By the way, "contain" without the s. blue eyes contain the sea!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/12/2015 12:53:00 AM

It is words not lines, I just checked again. I fixed it. Thanks, Connie

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/12/2015 12:50:00 AM

Thank you my friend. Your are correct and I appreciate your help as always, I bow to my teacher. Smile. Hugs, Connie

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/11/2015 11:43:00 PM

Very well written with a few well chosen words! Excellent poem, Connie! Good luck in the contest :)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/12/2015 12:54:00 AM

Thank you very much Laura. I appreciate you dropping by with your nice comment. Cheers, Connie