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Blue Daisy

Weeping in sorrow I set my eyes on a blue daisy, the dew it embraces seems to amaze me- As I think of my lover, my eyes start to get hazy, and all this sadness is driving me crazy. I sat by the sill and watched her blow with ease, but the gust came up and her petals did cease, One petal landed on the weeping willow trees, and I see the truth that nobody ever sees. I can’t help but think that blue daisy is me today, beauty with elegance with no verses to say- When the wind comes too close my petals they sway, and in that final moment my life swept away. Maybe she too had a love that died in vain, but I never once see that blue daisy complain- Now on her blue bud I see a crimson stain, where only heartache and woe remain. Weeping in sorrow that blue daisy I embrace, we are connected now, there’s nothing I can’t face- Now the anguish is gone without a single trace, I know now that no one can ever take my lover’s place. Blue Daisy June 20, 2017

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Date: 6/23/2017 12:43:00 PM
Thought this would place well, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 6/22/2017 10:10:00 PM
Congrats!!! Laura...beautiful entry and win...all the best...^WW^
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Date: 6/22/2017 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura, perfect and so very sad ~*
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Date: 6/21/2017 11:35:00 PM
What a heartbreaking tale told in this profound poem of yours! Congrats on your win, Laura.
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Date: 6/21/2017 7:29:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poems, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2017 10:11:00 AM
Hi Laura , wow amazing write , good luck in the contest :))) hugs
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Date: 6/20/2017 9:36:00 PM
This is the most amazing poem I've read about blue daisy, should do well if for contest!
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Date: 6/20/2017 6:05:00 PM
Impressive! I will say I have read most of these and so far I like this one best. A little sad but that is to my liking. Good luck, Laura:)
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