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Blue Cheese and Old Pickles

Blue Cheese and Old Pickles – 3-14-25 Dedicated to my Grandmother Pickel and her famous pickles. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Blue Cheese and Old Pickles Forgotten in a tapestry of shadows Woven in long twilights and long rows Of blue cheeses, tomatoes, daisies and flying salmon Shelves, birthing dust bunnies, Give up the last jar of her pickles Sealed in clear mason glass Still smelling of dill and garlic and her hands. Her handiwork still looks As fresh as crisp cucumbers Gathered in fields wearing sunflower bonnets And the scent of new earth readied To grow round again With new seeds Not to forget the children she gave into angel’s hands. Brought into the light, her love shimmers Through the artistry of her hands A rhapsody, sealed and sung across decades, Plays as I ladle jam and new pickles into her jars, Savoring my harvest with gorgonzola on toast And raspberry sherbet on a waffle cone.

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Date: 4/23/2025 4:22:00 PM
Your last line is my favorite. Her house must smell so good! Yummy :) A poem certainly deserving of first place!
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Date: 4/4/2025 12:22:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your top placement in craigsz contest! Well deserved!
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Date: 4/3/2025 5:34:00 AM
The yumminess of those last three lines! Congrats on first place, Sam!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/3/2025 12:42:00 PM
Hi Kim! Thank you for much for your note of congratulations! Not sure I was a bleu cheese fan growing up, but my grandmother always made sure there was raspberry sherbet and waffle cones for me in the summer. On hot summer days, I still want raspberry sherbet on a waffle cone! Old habits die hard, but that seems to bring me close to her again! She did that for all of us! Take care! Blessings of Lenten renewal to you!
Date: 4/3/2025 4:03:00 AM
Interesting. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/3/2025 12:37:00 PM
Hi Thriveni, thank you, dear friend! Grammie's pickles are a wonderful reminder of her and all that she did for everyone! When I was in college she suffered congestive heart failure. I got to take care of her and the house. It was a precious honor to return to her the love she lavished on me! Take care! Blessings and cheers!
Date: 4/3/2025 1:57:00 AM
A culinary delight honouring those handcrafted delights passed on by a loved on. I enjoyed the poignant message contained in these lines, Sam. Congrats on your 1st place win.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 4/4/2025 9:52:00 AM
Thank you, Sam - I am well. A homemade gift always puck at my heartstrings - a lovely tradition.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/3/2025 12:33:00 PM
Hi Suzette! Thank you so much for your congrats and your lovely note. My grandmother was so generous. Baking apple pies on Wednesday for family and friends and tucking a jar of pickles into the luggage of visitors as they returned home. Hadn't thought about much it till writing this poem and realizing that I do the same thing - a gift from my grandmother! Her legacy! Hope you are well. Blessings!
Date: 4/1/2025 5:29:00 PM
Poems that capture the essence of those long-lost pickles that grandma kept and then miraculously rediscovered in perfect shape. From what I can see from reading your words, spending time with your grandma was a pleasant memory. I appreciate you taking the time to describe the wonderful manner in which you and your grandma were able to finish the process. Truly enjoyed going through Sam, and Congratulations on your contest win
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/3/2025 12:27:00 PM
Dear Lasaad, your words bring me such joy like the joy I felt being with my grandmother on all of our shopping adventures! It gives me joy to know that you got to experience this very special woman through this poem and her famous pickles. I had a friend who used to spend the weekend with us. When she packed to go home, she always found a jar of pickles in her suitcase. That was the woman I knew! And through all of her sorrows, she never stopped giving or loving! Thank you for your congratulations and your thoughtful feedback, dear friend!
Date: 3/23/2025 10:41:00 PM
you vrought right into her kitchen and out swinging on the woods... amazing poesy, sam!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/3/2025 12:20:00 PM
Hi Nette! Her kitchen was truly the hub of our home and center for family! That last, though inedible, jar of pickles is such a treasure and has become a symbol of her love for all of us - family and friends! So glad I get to share her story through this contest theme! Thank you so much for your warm words of encouragement! Blessings!
Date: 3/22/2025 1:11:00 PM
My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, I adore the wistful, poignant spirit of your beautiful poem. Your deeply stirring verse brings me into the moment to savor flavors, feelings and memories of the present and past. There is sadness in the "children she gave into angel’s hands" but one gets the feeling that she lived every day with joy and satisfaction. An exquisite tribute to your Grandmother Pickel. I have a feeling she smiles upon you and fills you with her golden light. Warmest wishes sent on raspberry clouds of sunrise.. ~Susan
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/25/2025 11:33:00 AM
My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, your beautiful message took me right back into those summer days with my grandmother when we would make numerous trips to the Public Market to buy cucumbers for pickles, raspberries for jelly, peaches and pears for canning and the aromas in her kitchen as she preserved summer. Even through her loses, she lived every day with courage. I like to think of her smiling on me. Thank you for that beautiful consoling thought! Sending you my gratitude for your beautiful note and blessings of spring joy!
Date: 3/22/2025 9:33:00 AM
Dear samszy, this for some reason made me want to have some sherbet and waffle too, ah what a creative take on craigs prompt and how well youv written this! I love especially the lines "Her handiwork still looks As fresh as crisp cucumbers Gathered in fields wearing sunflower bonnets " what a way to describe! You have a very imaginative and artistic mindset! Shows through this too! How nostalgia flows in such eloquence, while you reminisce is what made my heart feel so much. Best wishes for the contest! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light today and always
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Date: 3/25/2025 11:40:00 AM
Dearest Inky, your wonderful message and comments added such joy to the writing of this poem. It brings me so much joy to know that through these words you were able to experience this amazing woman, the way she lived her life with courage and the precious gift she was to my life. I guess my love for her sparked my creativity! Another Grammie gift! Sending you a little raspberry sherbet on a waffle cone. She knew how much I loved raspberry sherbet and always made sure there was a carton in the freezer for me. That was just who she was! Blessings of joy to you! Samszy ~
Date: 3/18/2025 3:05:00 PM
Sweet memories of the near lost art of gardening and canning and the sadness in loss to angel's hands. I am reminded of my dear grandmother's root cellar and the rows of mason jars rent full of memories. And we, spoiled by "gorgonzola on toast" and the "raspberry sherbet on a waffle cone". hugs and blessing dear Sam :)
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Date: 3/17/2025 11:22:00 PM
Such lovely abiding memories of your grandmother and the times Sam. You weave the past so skillfully and intricatlely with the present in your poem. The world had no need for Apps back then did it? Good luck in Craig's contest. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 3/17/2025 5:33:00 PM
Nice poem, Sam. My grandmother used to make lots of jelly and jam, but I didn't ever help her with it. Times have sure changed.
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Date: 3/17/2025 11:14:00 AM
Hello Sam, this is a beautiful tribute to your grandmother, they made everything so much nicer. Beautifully penned. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead, my friend.
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Date: 3/17/2025 9:36:00 AM
What a wonderful memory; I can smell and taste those pickles. Hard to find here in the UK those that crunch as you bite into them. Thank you for sharing this poem that I can taste as I read it
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/25/2025 11:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Terry! Writing this poem brought back so many memories of things that my grandmother and I did together! Too bad you can't find a good crunch pickle! They are a treat. Sending blessings and my gratitude for your great feedback!
Date: 3/17/2025 5:19:00 AM
Dear Sam, I love our dear grandmas and there special touch. I could almost hear the soft rattle of a shelf giving up its last treasure, see the way light bends through old mason jars, feel the weight of absence softened by the permanence of what was given. There’s such tenderness in the act of carrying it forward abd not just remembering, but continuing. You made that real. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/25/2025 11:22:00 AM
Dear Daniel, grandmothers are indeed extraordinary gifts for our lives. I am so glad I was able to translate my relationship with her through this last jar of pickles. She was truly special not only to me but to our family and friends of multiple generations! Thank you dear friend for savoring the precious memory of her with me. Sending you blessings of spring renewal!!
Date: 3/16/2025 10:16:00 PM
What a beautiful tribute to your grandmother, Sam! I very much enjoyed this poem, and its recalled, precious memories. Blessings.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/18/2025 10:59:00 AM
Hi Evelyn! Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed sharing these memories of my grandmother with me. They are "precious memories" indeed. I miss her terribly even after all of these years. I hope all is well with you. Blessings of spring renewal to you!
Date: 3/16/2025 7:46:00 PM
Lovely poetry reflecting those forgotten jar of pickles your grandmother had stored away and re found in glorious condition to enjoy. Reading your comments it was a cherished memory to have experienced with your grandmother. Thank you for sharing your experience with your grandmother and the lovely way it took to complete the whole process. Really enjoyed reading Sam...
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/18/2025 10:54:00 AM
Hi Michael! Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed this journey back through time and into my childhood through the discovery of this precious jar of pickles. Although completely inedible, even unopened, they evoke precious memories. My grandmother was a very special presence in my life and finding this last jar of pickles brought back so many wonderful memories of her and the things we did together. I was so blessed to have had a grandmother like her! Sending you blessings and my gratitude for your lovely, heartwarming feedback!
Date: 3/16/2025 2:11:00 PM
Your "Blue Cheese and Old Pickles" is a fun/creative write. I enjoyed reading this one. "Good Luck" Great ending. I will take One raspberry sherbet on a waffle cone. Thanks... Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/16/2025 7:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paula! That last jar of pickles speaks volumes about my grandmother, her love, her creativity and the nobility of her life. Saving some sherbet for you! Blessings!
Date: 3/16/2025 10:46:00 AM
Very interesting - I liked your creative phrases. I read your comment to Anne. A lovely memory- I admire people who can can their own food! Great write, Sam <3
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/16/2025 7:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paige! That last jar of pickles is a constant reminder of the work of her hands and her life. What a wonderful opportunity to remember her love and her care for her family and community! Blessings
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/16/2025 7:41:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paige! That last jar of pickles is a constant reminder of the work of her hands and her life. What a wonderful opportunity to remember her love and her care for her family and community! Blessings
Date: 3/16/2025 10:37:00 AM
- Wonderful and creative... best wishes, Sam :) - hugs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/16/2025 10:43:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise! Thank you so much! Was a bit of a challenge to find a connection between the cheese and my grandmother's pickles but such a fun challenge in the end. In the summer as a child I would go to the Public Market with her to pick out pickling cucumbers, raspberries for jam along with other fruits and vegetables for canning while inhaling the scents of fish and intriguing cheeses! It is one of my favorite memories of her. When we cleaned out her pantry we found one last jar of her famous pickles. What a treasure! Sending hugs and blessings!

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