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Blowing My Fears Away

bubbles escape on golden wings of endless sky bubbles escape bursting in sunlight, losing shape my frightened breath in bubbles fly dusks fury leaves cool air on high bubbles escape (Bubbles) By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, February 10, 2012 For Nette Onclaud's Alphabets of Rondelet Contest sixth place

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Date: 2/21/2012 12:51:00 PM
Bubbles I thought was most difficult and you did so well.. Congrats Rhonda on your fabulous win. love, gautami
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/21/2012 1:13:00 PM
Thanks Gautami!
Date: 2/20/2012 4:16:00 PM
Yours has great flow, Rhonda, congrats on your win!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/21/2012 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 2/20/2012 2:33:00 PM
Rhonda, wonderful poem. I can actually 'see' the picture you painted. I really enjoyed this write. Congrats on making the winners list in Nette's contest...................S.Ronthorpe
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/21/2012 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Samuel!
Date: 2/20/2012 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in ~Nette's~ "Alphabets Of Rondelet" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/21/2012 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Carol!
Date: 2/20/2012 11:27:00 AM
I like this a lot. Very worthy win. congratulations. Lvoe, joyce
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/20/2012 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce!
Date: 2/20/2012 11:05:00 AM
Just wonderful Rhonda.Congrats on your win in Nette's contest.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/20/2012 11:47:00 AM
Thank you Kash!
Date: 2/20/2012 9:51:00 AM
congrats Rhonda on a sweet success for this captivating entry luv..
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/20/2012 11:45:00 AM
Thank you Linda-Marie!
Date: 2/20/2012 4:55:00 AM
beautifully esoressed, rhonda.. how you turned something bubbly into a sense of fear is amazing!..congrats on your win in my contest! :) huggs
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/20/2012 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Nette, for the placement in your contest. When I was going through a difficult time, I had a friend tell me to blow bubbles visualizing my troubles floating away. It works!

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