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Blossoms and Bubbles - a Collab With Ja Fraser

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With this poem, I was inspired to do my first contest offer here in soup. I welcome you to participate... :)! the link:

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/member_contest_details.aspx?ContestID=6234

BLOSSOMS and BUBBLES

From aggregate supple stellar petals' smile, 
spring fragrance bubble spiral free in the air,
their porcelain blossoms dash perfection flair;
suitors bee, beguile the flower by buzzing style,
the blooms' fingers rush to blushes beyond compare.
Bard wind began to sing to serenade the buds in grins
rosy petals breathe a gentle sigh, one long mile...
Afar, some girls and boys see these Belles so rare--
they blow their dreams to root in land fertile.
They hope like blossoms their dreams curve in peak
though trials, struggles may round and round peep
for soon as seasons rouse may their journey begin
To the times their life drifts, avoiding not to weep
These blossoms and bubbles psalm, wisdom speak
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J.A. Fraser and O.E. Guillermo
9:37 pm, March 03, 2015

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Elaine George

Date: 7/17/2015 4:59:00 PM

Dear Olive, I see you and James often write as a team. You both do it so well! I also love Sonnets and this is a beauty. I love the picture you put with it I as yet don't know how to do that, I have been away from the soup for some time. I too have written sonnets and love this form. My best known one is entitled: A Winter Rose. Elaine

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/19/2015 2:00:00 AM

Elaine, I have read some of your works before and you write great! welcome back!!shall take note of your titles and go back to them.. :D! ~Olive Eloisa

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 4/2/2015 8:00:00 AM

Fabulous flowing read, what a pleasure.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/9/2015 8:14:00 PM

It is a pleasure to read your comment Scott.. :)! thank you.. :)!//olive eloisa

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2015 2:55:00 PM

Great collaborative work..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by my work about the Leland Cyprus..They get infected with a fungus that kills them...The native cedars in our area have a natural resistence to this disease and can throw it off..It is sad to see a nice healthy row of these get it for they start dying one by one..It can be sprayed with an antifungal spray to keepthe fungus down..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/2/2015 10:53:00 AM

thanks much Sara for such generous comments.. :)! glad you liked it.. :) but this not for contest.. :O!

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 3/29/2015 1:46:00 AM

Wow. Am impressed! And am in love! Wonderful job you too. :-)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/29/2015 5:44:00 AM

Thank you so much Njeri.. :)! I appreciate your drop by and I hope you can join.. :)!

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/29/2015 1:46:00 AM

Two

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/27/2015 4:54:00 AM

Recipe: Two gifted pens, Pen, Paper, Inspiration. Result: One Brilliant Sonnet Judgement: A Fav! Comments: I loved this write you two. Final Words: Lots Of Love, Armand

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/28/2015 9:02:00 AM

Hi Armand, I thank you for visiting my poem today.. :) It just came one day about this theme.. Well, I dared him.. I thought it is an easy theme but then when I want to lay down the thought I have--we have, he and I had a hard time.. :) Thank you so much fro making this a fave.. :)

Len Gasun

Date: 3/27/2015 1:49:00 AM

An excellent collaboration of two great poets and a dear amigo and amigo of mine! I love it and thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your precious time to read my haiku and your wishes. Can have sunshine smile now. TY. My mom & company are here :)))) Wish you're happy too. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/28/2015 9:03:00 AM

HI Leonora, When I came across to your carousel poem and seen your pic with the cherry blossoms, well i thought since then to visit your poems once in a while when I get much that time.. :) And As I do, I am not disappointed as you paint and pen beautiful verses.. :)

Robert Lawrence

Date: 3/26/2015 4:46:00 PM

Very inspirational and compelling.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/28/2015 9:00:00 AM

thank you much Lawrence.. :)

Constance La France

Date: 3/26/2015 8:10:00 AM

Olive, you both did an amazing job writing this beautiful poem, it is wonderful and rates a 7 for me and it is great inspiration for your contest . .

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/28/2015 1:13:00 AM

thanks much Broken Wings.. :)! I hope you can join... :)!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/25/2015 4:16:00 PM

Well done!! (to both of you). A lovely title which has produced an array of spritely words and phrases, movement and imagery. // To Olive_eloi....good luck...may your first contest blossom! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/28/2015 1:11:00 AM

thank you for liking it Paul.. :) weeeee. i hope so it will blossoms.. :)~

David Meade

Date: 3/25/2015 1:51:00 PM

I was blown away by the blossoms and bubbles . . . the words floated off the page! Well done you two!! 7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/26/2015 4:24:00 AM

Thanks much David.. am so glad for your visit.. :)! God bless us always.. :)!

James Fraser

Date: 3/25/2015 1:25:00 PM

Hiya Oliz, thanks for the lovely moments writing our collab 'Blossoms and Bubbles' it's always fun writing with you :-) Also mega ((((( applause ))))) for hosting a contest for the first time on the same theme. Way to go girl, so looking forward to following it - hugs//Dino James xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/26/2015 4:13:00 AM

Weeeee thanks for the person who gifted with the membership.. if not because of him I'll not be able to do such.. :) Dino James, I like it when our pens and inks interweave to create such poems... :)! I echo my comment on your page.. but mmmmn let's write again? :D~olive eloisa