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Blooming Dawn

zephry kiss white eyelids flutter open ~ gardenia love (group 2)

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Date: 8/11/2023 5:17:00 AM

Pretty! Congratulations!

Date: 8/10/2023 1:35:00 PM

Sweet Jo! Congratulations on the win! :)

Date: 8/10/2023 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. Thank you for participating. Sara

Date: 8/10/2023 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a great day with your win...............

Date: 8/9/2023 11:02:00 AM

A very light and "zephry" piece, Joanna. BOL in the contest.

Date: 8/3/2023 11:56:00 AM

So romantic, Jo, awakening to a kiss! Lovely image. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings.

Date: 7/31/2023 10:10:00 AM

- A sweet one ... lovely, Jo :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Date: 7/31/2023 8:21:00 AM

Pretty, Joanna!

Date: 7/31/2023 8:03:00 AM

I love this great way of using the words. I love gardenias. Good luck

Date: 7/31/2023 7:19:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, Jo. I like your description of gardenia petals opening---

Date: 7/31/2023 7:02:00 AM

ooh i like this! i thought this word combo would make for an interesting haiku

Date: 7/31/2023 2:01:00 AM

Oh... what a mesmerising haiku. Honestly... loved every line because you employed some of my favorite imagery. Wonderful!

Date: 7/31/2023 12:52:00 AM

This is lovely. Well done.