Bliss

Nuggets of cool dawn Kissing the Chrysanthemum Tongue at the tea cup ______________________________ May 11//2017

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Bawa Talwar

Date: 5/28/2017 5:48:00 PM

I simply loved it ! The petals as fresh as dawn n accompanied by tea wow! Amazing indeed.

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/28/2017 11:18:00 PM

Thank you ...

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/16/2017 2:35:00 PM

Hello Probir. I found this entry very original. I love the thought of course. You remained true to the voice and tone. Wonderful work completely. We readers can see you had fun with this entry.

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/18/2017 10:22:00 AM

Indeed so, Lisa ... Very objective comment ... I like it ... Thank you ...

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/11/2017 8:58:00 AM

I'll have coffee, please:) Lovely haiku, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/11/2017 12:12:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel ...

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 5/11/2017 5:08:00 AM

Ooh the first cup of tea of the day.....bliss. #7

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/11/2017 5:40:00 AM

Yes , the tongue on the cup while the lips of dawn on the petals ... thank you for liking ....

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/11/2017 1:48:00 AM

In China they make tea out of every flower dear, Probir! Refreshing Haiku!

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/11/2017 5:43:00 AM

Here the emphasis is not on the tea only but the cup as well accompanied by the dawn fondling the flowers ... including those at your roof top too ... For your ever enlightening comment, thank you ...

White Wolf

Date: 5/10/2017 9:42:00 PM

A beautiful haiku, Probir! Love this one!

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/11/2017 5:44:00 AM

Thank you ...