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. A meadowlark sings to the morning as a new day fondles the hills Sun rests warmly on my cheek This moment here to cling fragile as a dream ~ Then flutters on~ One little blink at dawn ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/12/2015 2:24:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Carrie! Wonderful subtle expressions !
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Date: 8/12/2015 2:03:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/12/2015 1:32:00 AM
Carrie, It was an honor to read. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog "BE MINDFUL WHEN YOU WRITE" if you'd like or have time. Once again, thank you. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/11/2011 3:17:00 PM
Congratulations on a big well deserved win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:46:00 AM
mighty cheers to you dear carrie for an amazing top win.. happy to share the spot with you! :) huggs
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Brian's latest contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:13:00 AM
Breathtaking Nonet, Carrie. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:12:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win with these elegant lines of poetry luv..
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Date: 3/21/2011 4:01:00 PM
Beautiful Nonet, Carrie. Number 1 in my book. Lainie
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Date: 3/20/2011 1:28:00 PM
Definitely one of the best entries I've seen, Carrie. Excellent use of personification with the meadowlark and the sun. This nonet has a magical quality to it. Looking forward to seeing your poem in the winners' circle! Love, carolyn
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Date: 3/19/2011 1:42:00 AM
Love this Nonet. Best wishes in the contest, this reads like a winner. Em :)
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Date: 3/18/2011 10:28:00 PM
Wow this is so stunning Carrie, I love your "fondles" line it made me smile.. Good luck with this gorgeous Nonet, love Wilma
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Date: 3/18/2011 9:43:00 PM
very beautiful imagery
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