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Bleeding hazel eyes of infinite azure, Diamond deluge in sapphire shadow, Atrocities handled a fractious austere, Smothered ashes of guilt and sallow. Diamond deluge in sapphire shadow, Heartbeats synced to cosmic sound, Smothered ashes of guilt and sallow, Six feet beneath the ruby rose, crowd. Heartbeats synced to cosmic sound, Rose petals of heaven blowing bliss, Six feet beneath the ruby rose, crowd, Hapless bodies plunging into the abyss. Rose petals of heaven blowing bliss, Inside a cobalt blue flowering bloom, Hapless bodies plunging into the abyss, Spasms steeply mingled with the fume. Inside a cobalt blue flowering bloom, Atrocities handled a fractious austere, Spasms steeply mingled with the fume, Bleeding hazel eyes of infinite azure.
  Written: May 10, 2022

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Date: 5/16/2022 12:54:00 AM
Your imagery is popping out of the page with such prettiness!
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Date: 5/12/2022 11:04:00 AM
Lasaad, I don't have to hope you win, I know you will win. A breathtaking Pantoum. I wish you well forever (Like Gershon's poem), some believe in forever, some don't, but i do. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/11/2022 4:47:00 AM
A poem adorned in ornate words. Colorful and eventful depiction, Lasaad.
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Date: 5/11/2022 3:22:00 AM
Now that's a poem I admire., so full of imagery.
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Date: 5/10/2022 9:17:00 PM
Deftly you have handled a difficult poetic form Pantoum and that too on a lofty theme ! All the Best in the contest dear poet friend !
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