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Blazing Summer

thousands of suns blaze the tranquil meadows Sol's diffused light May 21, 2016 Suns refer to sunflower fields * Sol is the Greek Sun god

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James Inman

Date: 6/9/2016 1:11:00 PM

Beautifully thought out Balveen.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 6/9/2016 2:36:00 PM

Thanks James!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2016 9:46:00 AM

Very beautiful Balveen congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/31/2016 12:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan!

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/28/2016 9:03:00 AM

Brilliantly conceived, congratulations Blaveen...

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/31/2016 12:39:00 PM

Many thanks Charlie!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2016 9:01:00 PM

I just loved your showing the flowers as a multitude of sunflowers . Everything is wonderful in this one. Congrats for your win, Balveen

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/28/2016 7:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea! I'm surely elated. Love & hugs, Balveen

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/27/2016 7:21:00 PM

Excellent Balveen! Congratulations on your deserving top win! #7 ;)

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/28/2016 7:20:00 AM

Thanks Connie!

Meenakshi Raina

Date: 5/27/2016 1:22:00 PM

Nicely written....congrats on your win!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/28/2016 7:21:00 AM

Thanks Meenakshi!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/27/2016 12:19:00 PM

We have fields of "suns" near here..it is a wonderful sight. Enjoyed your poem, congrats. BG

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/28/2016 7:38:00 AM

Thanks Barbara!

Karam Misra

Date: 5/27/2016 11:39:00 AM

Good one, Balveen. Rows upon rows of sunflowers turning with the sun - excellent image. Congratulations in a terrific sun.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/28/2016 7:39:00 AM

Thanks Karam!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/27/2016 10:14:00 AM

Cleverly projected haiku, Balveen. I can see the sun's light reflected on the sunflowers. Congratulations on this deserved win. // paul

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/28/2016 7:22:00 AM

Paul, thanks ever so much!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/27/2016 9:54:00 AM

Nice win! Congratulations!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/28/2016 7:22:00 AM

Thanks Kim!

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/27/2016 9:52:00 AM

Balveen, congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hug, Sandra

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/28/2016 7:30:00 AM

Thanks Sandra!

Lukas Ficklin

Date: 5/27/2016 9:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Balveen... Well written :)

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/28/2016 7:30:00 AM

Thanks Lukas!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/19/2016 2:14:00 AM

I will admit this sailed right over my head. Please explain it to me Balveen. Thank you my friend. ; )

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/19/2016 4:50:00 AM

The brightness of the sunflowers outshine the Sun god's rays, much to his embarrassment.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/17/2016 4:35:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Balveen Cheema
Date: 5/18/2016 4:49:00 AM

Thanks Sara! Sweet of you to say so! Love...