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Blazing Summer

thousands of suns 
                                            
                                          blaze the tranquil meadows

                                                 Sol's diffused light



                                                    May 21, 2016
                                                
                                                
                                   


  Suns refer to sunflower fields
* Sol is the Greek Sun god

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James Inman Date: 6/9/2016 1:11:00 PM Beautifully thought out Balveen. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 6/9/2016 2:36:00 PM Thanks James!

Jan Allison Date: 5/28/2016 9:46:00 AM Very beautiful Balveen congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/31/2016 12:40:00 PM Thank you so much, Jan!

Charlie Smith Date: 5/28/2016 9:03:00 AM Brilliantly conceived, congratulations Blaveen... Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/31/2016 12:39:00 PM Many thanks Charlie!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/27/2016 9:01:00 PM I just loved your showing the flowers as a multitude of sunflowers . Everything is wonderful in this one. Congrats for your win, Balveen Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/28/2016 7:18:00 AM Thank you so much Andrea! I'm surely elated. Love & hugs, Balveen

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/27/2016 7:21:00 PM Excellent Balveen! Congratulations on your deserving top win! #7 ;) Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/28/2016 7:20:00 AM Thanks Connie!

Meenakshi Raina Date: 5/27/2016 1:22:00 PM Nicely written....congrats on your win! Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/28/2016 7:21:00 AM Thanks Meenakshi!

Barbara Gorelick Date: 5/27/2016 12:19:00 PM We have fields of "suns" near here..it is a wonderful sight. Enjoyed your poem, congrats. BG Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/28/2016 7:38:00 AM Thanks Barbara!

Karam Misra Date: 5/27/2016 11:39:00 AM Good one, Balveen. Rows upon rows of sunflowers turning with the sun - excellent image. Congratulations in a terrific sun. Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/28/2016 7:39:00 AM Thanks Karam!

Paul Callus Date: 5/27/2016 10:14:00 AM Cleverly projected haiku, Balveen. I can see the sun's light reflected on the sunflowers. Congratulations on this deserved win. // paul Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/28/2016 7:22:00 AM Paul, thanks ever so much!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/27/2016 9:54:00 AM Nice win! Congratulations! Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/28/2016 7:22:00 AM Thanks Kim!

Sandra Haight Date: 5/27/2016 9:52:00 AM Balveen, congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hug, Sandra Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/28/2016 7:30:00 AM Thanks Sandra!

Lukas Ficklin Date: 5/27/2016 9:48:00 AM Congratulations on your win, Balveen... Well written :) Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/28/2016 7:30:00 AM Thanks Lukas!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/19/2016 2:14:00 AM I will admit this sailed right over my head. Please explain it to me Balveen. Thank you my friend. ; ) Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/19/2016 4:50:00 AM The brightness of the sunflowers outshine the Sun god's rays, much to his embarrassment.

Sara Kendrick Date: 5/17/2016 4:35:00 PM Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Balveen Cheema Date: 5/18/2016 4:49:00 AM Thanks Sara! Sweet of you to say so! Love...