Kim Rodrigues Poet Vaasokht

Blank Pages of a Doormat

"What is life but a succession of preludes to unwritten words . . . "

                                 Quote by_Constance La France

BLANK PAGES OF A DOORMAT

a touch of emotion is what she’s after…his touch a fire
lit inside their combatant stoves…pen ought to inspire

tit and tat attention, enclosed in verbal laundromat -
mumbling and tumbling inside - the words of a doormat

no conception in this tight-fisted vestibule - counselor points
to a list of verbs, nouns, adjectives - each word disappoints

11/14/2022
WRITING CHALLENGE - ''V'' Forms
Sponsor: Constance La France
Theme: Writing

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Sara Kendrick December 4, 2022 at 2:43 AM Congratulations on your winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France November 29, 2022 at 1:55 PM Kim, an interesting form, I must try to write one. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge V Forms inspired by my quote, well done, blessings Kim Rodrigues December 1, 2022 at 3:41 PM Thank you! Enjoyed exploring a new form!

Nancy Kaufman November 17, 2022 at 7:30 AM Super duper job Kim. Good luck on your contest. Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2022 at 8:19 PM Thank you, Nancy!

Suzanne Delaney November 16, 2022 at 4:15 AM Excellent, Kim: The quote and chosen form are perfect together. You’ve penned a sure winner. Best, SuZ Kim Rodrigues November 17, 2022 at 8:18 PM Thank you, Suz!

Sara Kendrick November 15, 2022 at 4:06 AM I would say this one is its way to be on the winners' list. You have gone clearly up to the top. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Kim Rodrigues November 15, 2022 at 6:11 AM Thank you, Sara! Always glad to read your poems! God bless!

Victor Buhagiar November 15, 2022 at 2:55 AM This is so well done and just in accordance with the quote. Hugs. Best for a win. Kim Rodrigues November 15, 2022 at 6:11 AM Thank you, my friend!

Jenna Logan November 15, 2022 at 2:19 AM Living in such a relationship gave me lots of reasons to write. Nicely written by you this time, Kim. Kim Rodrigues November 15, 2022 at 6:12 AM A big hug, sweet poet ~ Kim

Tom Cunningham November 14, 2022 at 11:31 PM Thought provoking verse Kim, we can't write about it until happens. Good luck in the contest. Tom Kim Rodrigues November 15, 2022 at 6:13 AM Thank you, Tom! :)

Harry Horsman November 14, 2022 at 8:46 PM Oh, this is superb poetry, Kim. just love it...Harry Kim Rodrigues November 15, 2022 at 6:12 AM Thank you so much, Harry! Hugs ~

L Milton Hankins November 14, 2022 at 7:38 PM Very interesting and very well done, Kim. I think you'll find a place on Constance's winner's list for this one. Kim Rodrigues November 14, 2022 at 8:36 PM Thank you so much, Milton!