Blackberries In Wilderness

I walked past leaving the noisy streets behind Entered a less travelled path leading to the woods Where the scene gleamed with refreshing verdure Here Nature lay in calm repose, deaf to all hustle n’ scuffle Welcomed by the scent of flowers and foliage, I stood in this engulfing ocean of silence. The place calmed my mind and lulled my nerves. As I proceeded, watching each blade of grass n’ flower I sighted a pathway between thickets Like the midline parting of a woman’s hair Seeing it strewn with stones and thorny brambles I was resentful to take that route, but something Caught my sight....! Amid the bracken There was a bramble full of ripe blackberries It was an unexpected bounty, the wilderness offered me How beautifully the ripe berries clung to one another Those onyx beads, those cobalt shiny spheres! How temptingly they looked in their glossy sheen Braving their prickles that scraped my wrists I reached out my hands to pluck them I wondered-was it wicked of me to have picked them? When I tasted them, I couldn’t withstand the temptation To pluck more and more, so sweet and succulent With no dust or dirt and not needing to be washed or wiped As the tangle of thorns caressed my hands and skin With bleeding arms and purple juice in the corners of my lips I plucked and ate them as much as I could With no can or container to collect them, I left the rest for birds and bunnies to relish While leaving, I felt the curved prickles hooking into my clothes As if inviting to munch them till my tongue turned into indigo hue. August.1.2022 Thoughts on Blackberries Poetry Contest Sponsor- Matt Caliri
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Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 9:33 AM
Those onyx beads, those cobalt shiny spheres! Seems to be a lusting for blackberries, whether caught in their bramble or trying to escape. The birds and bunnies hope you leave the rest. Love love love this, Valsa! Hugs ~ Kim
Baker Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 4:57 PM
You did an excellent job of fully describing the experience of picking and eating berries. Right down to the scratches and drools. :-) Good luck in the contest my friend. Bill
Leffanta Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 11:11 AM
Mama bear & cubs love blackberries, too!' Enjoyed! Aloha!
Poet Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 6:44 AM
Valsa, your writing is always of the highest caliber. The trek into the forest gathering blackberries was one that was very much savored. Lovely use of language and really vivid imagery.
Sangster - K Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 6:34 AM
I enjoyed reading your blackberry adventure :-) There is nothing better than picking fresh fruit straight from a bush or the vine. Cheers Anne :-)
Callus Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 6:33 AM
I truly enjoyed this lovely poem, Valsa. There is nowhere in Malta where to go picking wild blackberries, but I have done that a few times abroad when staying with my in-laws. ~ Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 6:26 AM
Much enjoyed the enjoyed the journey through wilderness picking blackberries. Expertly written, as always, Valsa. Best to you.
Cunningham Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:27 AM
Nothing tastes finer than the fruit nature provides, have often I've had my hands turn purple picking them lol. Tom
George Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:42 AM
Yes, berries of the wild type have a natural flavour and it is a thrill sighting them and eating them ! Thanks a lot Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:07 AM
Beautiful vocabulary, great imagery and lovely fruit. Hugs.
George Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 1:39 AM
Thank you so much dear Victor ! Feel so happy for the attributes given to my poem.
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