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Black Halo

Fra Angelico Sermon on the Mount Jesus and his tight knit group the pristine sculptured scene breathtaking and serene a halo light surrounds the head of keen ears leaning in it’s as if the disciples have died and gone to heaven to relive this ultimate speech robe’d in blue, red and pinks yet there’s a disparity, a blot Judas’ halo is black he’s nothing more than a crescent moon to be blown off the mountain peak be the absentee scourge remembered no more floored to the basement of hell O that each one a saint bereft of sins’ chains the silver in his grip a shark in their midst shamed, shamed by the Lord in chains who’d die for him a lame duck who’d not embrace the words of God’s lips as if they were life itself 2/4/2021

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Date: 2/20/2021 6:43:00 AM
Judas realized he did wrong, and he took his own life for what he did. It was too late by then. Good write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/20/2021 6:59:00 AM
When you contrast Peter and Judas...Peter truly loved the Lord and was ashamed at his denial of the Lord. Judas had the heart of a greedy soul. He likewise spent time with Jesus, seeing his miracles, hearing his words. One wonders how he did not cling to those life-saving moments but instead stole from the money bag. So sad.
Date: 2/4/2021 6:53:00 PM
We should know but we often refuse to hear. Wonderful reflection of faith.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 7:39:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/4/2021 4:51:00 PM
Great poem. I sense the indignation in your voice when Judas and the black halo appears on the scene. A disparity indeed when contrasted against the lives of the other disciples. This contrast and the descriptions that follow really add to the poem in a very powerful way. Best wishes for 2021.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 7:40:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! We are knee deep in 2021. This pandemic holds on but we soldier on! Best wishes for this year. May God bless this year.
Date: 2/4/2021 11:20:00 AM
Of epic proportions poem, Dearest Kim! Awe-inspiring! Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 2:22:00 PM
Thank you so much! Hugs!
Date: 2/4/2021 10:13:00 AM
Alas he was warned beforehand. But he did not heed. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 10:31:00 AM
As we all are.

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