Black Halo

Fra Angelico Sermon on the Mount
Jesus and his tight knit group
the pristine sculptured scene
breathtaking and serene
a halo light surrounds the head
of keen ears leaning in
it’s as if the disciples have died
and gone to heaven to relive
this ultimate speech
robe’d in blue, red and pinks
yet there’s a disparity, a blot
Judas’ halo is black
he’s nothing more
than a crescent moon
to be blown off the mountain peak
be the absentee scourge
remembered no more
floored
to the basement of hell
O that each one a saint
bereft of sins’ chains
the silver in his grip
a shark in their midst
shamed, shamed
by the Lord in chains
who’d die for him
a lame duck
who’d not embrace
the words of God’s lips
as if they were life itself

2/4/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Pettit Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 6:43 AM
Judas realized he did wrong, and he took his own life for what he did. It was too late by then. Good write.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 6:59 AM
When you contrast Peter and Judas...Peter truly loved the Lord and was ashamed at his denial of the Lord. Judas had the heart of a greedy soul. He likewise spent time with Jesus, seeing his miracles, hearing his words. One wonders how he did not cling to those life-saving moments but instead stole from the money bag. So sad.
Krutsinger Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 6:53 PM
We should know but we often refuse to hear. Wonderful reflection of faith.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 7:39 PM
Thank you!
Cholt Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 4:51 PM
Great poem. I sense the indignation in your voice when Judas and the black halo appears on the scene. A disparity indeed when contrasted against the lives of the other disciples. This contrast and the descriptions that follow really add to the poem in a very powerful way. Best wishes for 2021.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 7:40 PM
Thank you, my friend! We are knee deep in 2021. This pandemic holds on but we soldier on! Best wishes for this year. May God bless this year.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 11:20 AM
Of epic proportions poem, Dearest Kim! Awe-inspiring! Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 2:22 PM
Thank you so much! Hugs!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Alas he was warned beforehand. But he did not heed. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 10:31 AM
As we all are.
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