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Line Gauthier's BiteSize Poem no87 Contest 7 Aug 24

Grows the night when breaths lay quietly On obscure spaces fluid as the wind, Where clouds of rest become a hammock , Lulling frayed nerves with incense As blend of matter and being cleaves- For beyond dimensions...grows the the night.

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Jcb Brul

Date: 8/16/2024 5:22:00 AM

You have the power to speak with substance in just few words! You are a master of brevity in colour. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. A fave!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/14/2024 4:39:00 AM

Back with congrats!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/13/2024 7:31:00 AM

beautiful poem ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/12/2024 5:50:00 PM

Congrats on your win in Line Gauthier's contest, Nette. So many of your poems, like this one, contain that 'extra dimension.' ~ Cheers, Gershon

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/10/2024 10:46:00 AM

Congratulations for winning the bite size contest, Nette! That's poetry, I like your style.

Crystol Woods

Date: 8/10/2024 7:57:00 AM

Congratulations on a much deserved win! Xo

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/10/2024 4:52:00 AM

amazing thought: night beyond dimensions. beautiful dear poet. Congratulations on your win. Cheers.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/9/2024 11:30:00 AM

Nette, you have a way to transport me to an ethereal place and one that seems dreamy. It's fun to go there for a while and makes me smile to explore it. Thanks!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/8/2024 6:49:00 AM

Has an ethereal feel! … Where clouds of rest become a hammock. Lovely, Nette!

Silent One

Date: 8/7/2024 3:02:00 AM

You said a lot in only few lines.. a lovely arrangement of words..

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/6/2024 8:35:00 AM

Dear Nette, I loved how your words show night and sleep are portrayed as expansive experiences that offer more than just physical rest. I loved to dream and yes it provides an opportunity for spiritual renewal and a connection to the ineffable aspects of existence. Well Inked!- Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Ink Empress

Date: 8/6/2024 7:54:00 AM

You have a way with painting imagery through words dear nette, this is beautiful! I especially love “ Where clouds of rest become a hammock ,” unique description of clouds so well delivered and written! Best wishes for the contest

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/6/2024 3:05:00 AM

Dear Nette, this has your signature of excellency all over it, your lines are both subliminal and beautiful ! You always raise the bar when it comes to poetry, love your precious heart. Wishing you the best day ever dear xo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/5/2024 11:32:00 PM

We all welcome it, a chance to recharge our batteries and forget about the turmoil of the day. Hope you're keeping well Nette. Good luck in the contest. Tom