Birthday Smile

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Tetractys
Invented by Ray Stebbing, a 5 line poem with syllables (1,2,3,4,10) or (10,4,3,2,1). A double Tetractys syllable count is (1,2,3,4,10, 10,4,3,2,1) or (10,4,3,2,1,1,2,3,4,10)

apples, roses, cards, and gifts are neatly placed in a straight row on the teacher’s desk and scanning her students she rewards them with a genuine happy birthday smile (Double Tetractys) Double Tetractys 7 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper # of the photo used "2" Syllables checked with How Many Syllables

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/1/2021 8:26:00 AM

Nice one Emile :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/2/2021 11:22:00 AM

Thanks Linda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/1/2021 7:19:00 AM

Hi Emile, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/1/2021 7:26:00 AM

Thanks Alexis, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2021 11:18:00 PM

Great imagery and feel, Emile, in your verse. Thank you for creating and entering my contest. Do visit my Double Tetractys 7 blog. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/1/2021 7:25:00 AM

Thanks Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.