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Bird Whisperer - Dream Boy

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Got to thinking of an old favorite song of mine sung by Karen Carpenter. It was a huge hit for its time!

*Why do birds suddenly appear every time you are near? Just like me, they long to be close to you - from “Close to You” by the Carpenters How soothing are your whispers; how loving is your touch. How tender are your azure eyes, and when you smile, Dear, my worries flee! You have to know, I love you oh so much - my Dream Boy, for whom -when you are near – *birds suddenly appear! July 27, 2020 for the "Four Lines" Poetry Contest of Constance La France

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John Watt

Date: 7/30/2020 11:34:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Andrea. This song was ubiquitous on 70's radio.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/30/2020 9:10:00 AM

Congrats Andrea to win on your beautiful poem. Love

Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 5:24:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest with this wonderful write _Constance

Bryan Norton

Date: 7/28/2020 7:47:00 PM

Andrea, please tell me why Woodpeckers suddenly appear Everytime, I am near Simply said They like to peck On my head. On the day that I was born The angels got together, And decided that a dream would never do So they sprinkled sardines on my head And some roses that are really dead And a sleeping bag with Bean and Onslow too That is why, all the birds in town Peck my head, up and down Just like that I need a hat How about you?

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/29/2020 10:14:00 AM

You are a hoot, Bryan. Thanks for your rhyming comments today on two of my poems.

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/28/2020 6:29:00 PM

Lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your win.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/28/2020 1:31:00 PM

Oh this is a wonderful and soothing lullaby Andrea. Love the tender emotions flowing through the muse. Congratulations on your win! :)

V. Deepa

Date: 7/28/2020 10:28:00 AM

Loved the twist in the end:-) Congratulations on your Beautiful win dear Andrea mam:-)Keep inspiring.Take care. Much love~Deepa:-)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/28/2020 8:44:00 AM

Very nice connection to the wonderful song by the Carpenters, Andrea. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/28/2020 4:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your honored 4 lines.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/28/2020 4:27:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea; I had almost forgotten about Karen Carpenter and yet her voice was exquisite!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2020 2:54:00 AM

- Four lovely lines, Andrea ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/27/2020 11:16:00 PM

lol..birds suddenly appear.. lovely write Andrea...Good luck in the contest..

Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/27/2020 8:59:00 PM

Andrea, Little drummer girl with a proud golden voice. Takes me back. -Richard

Michael Tor

Date: 7/27/2020 12:28:00 PM

I Remember the song Andrea. One of my favorites, the Carpenters. Your poem fits so well with the song. Enjoyed reading...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/27/2020 12:09:00 PM

A tender whisper song--lovely write, Andrea.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/27/2020 11:37:00 AM

Always better than butterflies in one's tummy! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/27/2020 10:56:00 AM

That's one of my favorite songs, too - this is a lovely poem, especially 'tender azure eyes' - best of luck in the contest-

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/27/2020 10:02:00 AM

That song took me back Andrea, loved their music. Good luck in the contest Tom