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leaving the orchard a robin bears a small meal . . . the gliding cherry Jan. 25, 2021 for Tania's contest

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Date: 1/30/2021 8:15:00 PM
lovely imagery, Andrea ~ congrats on your podium finish
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Date: 1/28/2021 12:24:00 PM
Back to fave this piece of marvel...i love this cute haiku..
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Date: 1/27/2021 2:11:00 PM
What wonders one can do with such few words and syllables! Good work.
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Date: 1/26/2021 8:58:00 PM
Superb! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/26/2021 7:59:00 PM
I knew this was headed for glory. Congrats on your podium win, Andrea. That last line is just such a stunner! Bravo, Gershon
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Date: 1/26/2021 6:19:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your Moment In Nature win with that stunning work. I’m absolutely delighted for you. Your comment on Hypnotic Aural Guru is really appreciated. Many thanks Howard
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Date: 1/26/2021 4:59:00 PM
So beautiful a picture Andrea. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 1/26/2021 4:25:00 PM
Wow...such a cute scenario ...Great haiku!!!Congratulations on your awesome win.
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Date: 1/26/2021 3:15:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/26/2021 2:03:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your silver placement with your gorgeous haiku, love the imagery and the last line!
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Date: 1/26/2021 12:30:00 PM
lovely picture here, my friend
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Date: 1/26/2021 9:00:00 AM
Fine dining for sure. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for your visit. Sara
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Date: 1/26/2021 3:23:00 AM
Lovely and filled with grace... God bless you always sweet Andrea... with prayers and love sent your way
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Date: 1/26/2021 2:45:00 AM
Lovely Andrea. The imagery here is perfect. Well Done. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/26/2021 1:23:00 AM
Congratulations and an excellent Japanese Haiku Poem post my sister of God's inspirational grace, Andrea. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme stands out, and the tone moves the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, with God's richest grace and blessings to you and your loved ones always. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.
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Date: 1/26/2021 1:16:00 AM
Great haiku. The last line impressed me. ~~
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Date: 1/25/2021 10:41:00 PM
So LOVELY, one could imagine the moment Andrea. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 1/25/2021 5:55:00 PM
That last line is an absolute beaut, Andrea. Just right! Nailed it. :) gw
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Date: 1/25/2021 4:28:00 PM
Mmm.. he stole it from me!
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Date: 1/25/2021 10:42:00 PM
Haha
Date: 1/25/2021 2:38:00 PM
Andrea, Imaginative and charming haiku. Excellent. Best of luck. I appreciate your review of my haiku’s and your advice which I will act on. Your insights matter to me Howard
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Date: 1/25/2021 1:56:00 PM
Very, very kewl verse. Pangie xx
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Date: 1/25/2021 11:43:00 AM
- A lovely moment in the nature, Andrea :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/25/2021 11:17:00 AM
Hi Andrea, You captured a memorable moment. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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