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Bird

leaving the orchard a robin bears a small meal . . . the gliding cherry Jan. 25, 2021 for Tania's contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/30/2021 8:15:00 PM

lovely imagery, Andrea ~ congrats on your podium finish

Jcb Brul

Date: 1/28/2021 12:24:00 PM

Back to fave this piece of marvel...i love this cute haiku..

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/27/2021 2:11:00 PM

What wonders one can do with such few words and syllables! Good work.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/26/2021 8:58:00 PM

Superb! Congrats on your win!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2021 7:59:00 PM

I knew this was headed for glory. Congrats on your podium win, Andrea. That last line is just such a stunner! Bravo, Gershon

Howard Kerr

Date: 1/26/2021 6:19:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your Moment In Nature win with that stunning work. I’m absolutely delighted for you. Your comment on Hypnotic Aural Guru is really appreciated. Many thanks Howard

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/26/2021 4:59:00 PM

So beautiful a picture Andrea. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Jcb Brul

Date: 1/26/2021 4:25:00 PM

Wow...such a cute scenario ...Great haiku!!!Congratulations on your awesome win.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/26/2021 3:15:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/26/2021 2:03:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your silver placement with your gorgeous haiku, love the imagery and the last line!

Jack Horne

Date: 1/26/2021 12:30:00 PM

lovely picture here, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2021 9:00:00 AM

Fine dining for sure. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for your visit. Sara

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/26/2021 3:23:00 AM

Lovely and filled with grace... God bless you always sweet Andrea... with prayers and love sent your way

Judy Ball

Date: 1/26/2021 2:45:00 AM

Lovely Andrea. The imagery here is perfect. Well Done. God Bless, JB

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 1/26/2021 1:23:00 AM

Congratulations and an excellent Japanese Haiku Poem post my sister of God's inspirational grace, Andrea. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme stands out, and the tone moves the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, with God's richest grace and blessings to you and your loved ones always. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/26/2021 1:16:00 AM

Great haiku. The last line impressed me. ~~

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/25/2021 10:41:00 PM

So LOVELY, one could imagine the moment Andrea. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs ~ Ani

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/25/2021 5:55:00 PM

That last line is an absolute beaut, Andrea. Just right! Nailed it. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/25/2021 4:28:00 PM

Mmm.. he stole it from me!

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 1/25/2021 10:42:00 PM

Haha

Howard Kerr

Date: 1/25/2021 2:38:00 PM

Andrea, Imaginative and charming haiku. Excellent. Best of luck. I appreciate your review of my haiku’s and your advice which I will act on. Your insights matter to me Howard

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/25/2021 1:56:00 PM

Very, very kewl verse. Pangie xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2021 11:43:00 AM

- A lovely moment in the nature, Andrea :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/25/2021 11:17:00 AM

Hi Andrea, You captured a memorable moment. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis