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You shouldn't have been so greedy And at the feed box shovin'. For every four pounds that you gained It's an hour in the oven. I'm sorry if your Thanksgiving Is something less than happy. You should have listened to your ma When she talked about your pappy. She said that he was greedy, Chased the others from the trough. He was so big and looked so good They chopped his proud head off. Your brothers not so bold as you Will live for another year. I grab another drumstick as I brush away a tear. Joyce Johnson for Donna's contest. won 7th

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Date: 11/25/2009 10:39:00 AM
Excellent Light Poetry Joyce, many congrats on your winning piece in Donna's contest >> James,x
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Date: 11/23/2009 9:24:00 AM
lol. GOOD ONE! Congratulations on your will in Donna's contest, Joyce. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/22/2009 5:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Donna's Turkey Tribute contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/22/2009 10:08:00 AM
Turkeys must learn not to be so "greedy," Joyce. This is delightful. Congratulations on your success in Donna's contest. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/22/2009 8:44:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Donna's contest Joyce.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/21/2009 6:42:00 PM
Congrats, Joyce, on your winning poem in the turkey contest... good job ... may your holiday be as beautiful as your poem ... luv..
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Date: 11/21/2009 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your placing in my contest, Joyce! Loved the humor in this! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/5/2009 12:29:00 AM
Joyce thanks for your welcome comments Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/4/2009 12:21:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments today Joyce.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/1/2009 11:08:00 AM
Good luck in the contest. Sounds like a winner. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/1/2009 7:45:00 AM
This is so funny, Joyce! Had a good laugh reading it. The "meatiest" turkeys are indeed the best. Did you see the movie "Babe"? There was a duck who was afraid of being cooked, so he became somewhat anorectic. Just saw the movie again and, next to Babe of course, the duck was my favorite character. Thank you so much for this pick-me-up poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/31/2009 12:05:00 PM
This poem made me smile. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/30/2009 6:52:00 PM
Nice poem. Good luck in the contest. Pam.
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Date: 10/30/2009 2:06:00 PM
funny, good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 10/30/2009 1:59:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Joyce.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments today
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Date: 10/29/2009 8:28:00 AM
Turkeys have mothers too..this is tooo cute. BG
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Date: 10/29/2009 3:24:00 AM
Cute little Turkey poem...
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Date: 10/29/2009 2:58:00 AM
The realism of this write is a many-sided jewel that causes one to gaze deeper into the verses to extract as much as they can.You are a gifted writer that tells about things as they are.Sincerely,Eric
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Date: 10/28/2009 9:20:00 PM
micawber personification! well done Joyce!, jimbo
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Date: 10/28/2009 8:13:00 PM
Cute...enjoyed...good luck in the contest....Marty
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