Bigger and Better

You shouldn't have been so greedy
And at the feed box shovin'.
For every four pounds that you gained
It's an hour in the oven.
I'm sorry if your Thanksgiving
Is something less than happy.
You should have listened to your ma
When she talked about your pappy.
She said that he was greedy,
Chased the others from the trough.
He was so big and looked so good
They chopped his proud head off.
Your brothers not so bold as you
Will live for another year.
I grab another drumstick as
I brush away a tear.

Joyce Johnson

 for Donna's contest.  won 7th
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November 25, 2009 at 10:39 AM
Excellent Light Poetry Joyce, many congrats on your winning piece in Donna's contest >> James,x
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November 23, 2009 at 9:24 AM
lol. GOOD ONE! Congratulations on your will in Donna's contest, Joyce. Love, Lainie
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November 22, 2009 at 5:05 PM
Congratulations on your win in Donna's Turkey Tribute contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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November 22, 2009 at 10:08 AM
Turkeys must learn not to be so "greedy," Joyce. This is delightful. Congratulations on your success in Donna's contest. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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November 22, 2009 at 8:44 AM
Congrats on your success in Donna's contest Joyce.Rgds Brian
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November 21, 2009 at 6:42 PM
Congrats, Joyce, on your winning poem in the turkey contest... good job ... may your holiday be as beautiful as your poem ... luv..
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November 21, 2009 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations on your placing in my contest, Joyce! Loved the humor in this! Hugs, Donna
Strand Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 12:29 AM
Joyce thanks for your welcome comments Rgds Brian
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November 4, 2009 at 12:21 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments today Joyce.Rgds Brian
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November 1, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Good luck in the contest. Sounds like a winner. Keep writing. Sara
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November 1, 2009 at 7:45 AM
This is so funny, Joyce! Had a good laugh reading it. The "meatiest" turkeys are indeed the best. Did you see the movie "Babe"? There was a duck who was afraid of being cooked, so he became somewhat anorectic. Just saw the movie again and, next to Babe of course, the duck was my favorite character. Thank you so much for this pick-me-up poem! Love, Carolyn
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October 31, 2009 at 12:05 PM
This poem made me smile. Good luck in the contest!
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October 30, 2009 at 6:52 PM
Nice poem. Good luck in the contest. Pam.
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October 30, 2009 at 2:06 PM
funny, good luck in the contest!!
Strand Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 1:59 AM
Best wishes with this one Joyce.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments today
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October 29, 2009 at 8:28 AM
Turkeys have mothers too..this is tooo cute. BG
Bellman Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 3:24 AM
Cute little Turkey poem...
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October 29, 2009 at 2:58 AM
The realism of this write is a many-sided jewel that causes one to gaze deeper into the verses to extract as much as they can.You are a gifted writer that tells about things as they are.Sincerely,Eric
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October 28, 2009 at 9:20 PM
micawber personification! well done Joyce!, jimbo
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October 28, 2009 at 8:13 PM
Cute...enjoyed...good luck in the contest....Marty
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