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I came back from afar, friends, passing in front of a field to try to see deers, I see indeed an animal, I fix it three seconds, it is a boar, except that the moron begins to charge me, it is barely twenty meters, I, who had not run for a few years, I did not hesitate, I started to run , without thinking, as fast as my age allows me, I turned around after fifty meters, it is so much at my age, he did not follow me, I sat in front of a property to reassure myself, please good people, leave your gates open, Then I had to go back to my car so risk meeting him on my way, the return was long, I kept turning in front and behind, I was "hot" my friends, I unfortunately thought, "long live hunters", the animal is indeed dangerous and very wild....

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Date: 6/19/2024 9:13:00 AM
Meeting a boar on the way and seeing it charging at you is a big scare. I can feel your fight. When we are conquered by fear, either we become immobile or take to heels. In your case you ran as fast as you could and looking back you found the boar was not chasing you. Enjoyed this half suspenseful and half humorous writing.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/19/2024 7:11:00 PM
thank you Valsa very much for the beautiful and undestanding comment, you found the perfect words really, congrats
Date: 6/15/2024 5:45:00 PM
The javelinas in Texas are very destructive. Many crops are destroyed each year. One sow can have as many as 5-6 in a litter twice a year! Scary and stinky. :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/19/2024 7:13:00 PM
very instructive comment, we don't have javelinas in Europe i think , i confirm it was so scary that i postponed many things since there, have a nice day Linda
Date: 6/12/2024 7:46:00 PM
I like the intimacy of this poem . I can feel the sweat and emotion in your words Yann ! Glad the outcome was a good one ! Susan :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/13/2024 1:13:00 AM
Thanks susan for reading and kind comment, best wishes yann
Date: 6/12/2024 1:56:00 PM
Yann, is a wild animal. Difficult if you are facing them. Run if you can or stay without moving, I think, I would run as much as my legs let me. Funny. Well done.
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Date: 6/11/2024 4:52:00 PM
I had to laugh: I, who had not run for a few years, I did not hesitate…still terrifying, indeed! Yikes! Glad your safe, my friend.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/12/2024 5:02:00 AM
Thanks Kim, i didn't hesitate either, i am glad to be safe too, they are really dangerous, thanks for stopping by
Date: 6/11/2024 9:05:00 AM
now THAT is a big scare!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/12/2024 5:03:00 AM
thanks Andrea, for the moment of commenting and reading
Date: 6/8/2024 5:26:00 AM
Good thing the boar gave up the chase. I too would not be able to run much.
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/8/2024 3:03:00 PM
thank you so much victor for your support, appreciated, enjoy your week end yann
Date: 6/8/2024 4:58:00 AM
Oh gosh! That sounds so scary. I can imagine how terrifying it would have been: glad you managed to escape. Thank you for sharing this experience with us. Sending you light. Pleasure reading this
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/8/2024 3:06:00 PM
thank you so much IE, for understanding, i don't go in this place for a while, now, i didn't have the time to think, i just run away, this is now inspiring, but keep scary in my poor brain, take care and safe
Date: 6/7/2024 12:41:00 PM
That would be a true scare. They say that they are really dangerous with those tusks. Thanks for sharing this one with us and I am glad you are fine. Sara K
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/8/2024 3:07:00 PM
thanks sara, i didn't think they were so dangerous, now i hesitate to walk around in nature, towns and human are more safe ?have a nice week end
Date: 6/7/2024 3:33:00 AM
Oh what excitement, you could have done without I'm sure. Yann, your story is very interesting, I am wondering what I would have done in that predicament, probably run too lol Have a blessed day, thanks for visiting me :)
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Yann Rolland
Date: 6/8/2024 3:09:00 PM
thank you so much rose for the questionning, i think yoy woyld have done exactly the same, run away, blessings and poetry , take care yann

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