Big Chuck

There was once a guy named big Chuck Who always seemed to have terrible luck Until he met June One sunny afternoon She left him for a Doc, that offered a nip tuck 5-31-17 Alexis Y.

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/17/2017 10:09:00 AM

Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 6/9/2017 9:11:00 AM

Well call me a lame duck — I haven't been keeping an eye on Alexis and she's been lim'riking! YAY! Likey this one, poor Chuckie:-( Huggadookins! ~ j

Jan Allison

Date: 6/4/2017 5:34:00 PM

great humour Alexis it made me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2017 5:30:00 PM

Chuck has no luck!! I enjoyed this one muchly!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/3/2017 11:33:00 AM

Hi Alexis, a fine limerick, gave me a good laugh this afternoon. I have started reading Limericks more these days. Still can't write a decent one myself. A great Limerick Alexis. A fave for me. Hugs....Mike. XX

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/3/2017 10:33:00 AM

Ha, ha, ha, belly splitting laughter non-stop, Alexis. Cool limerick. Super funny. I've never wrote a limerick ... this gives me inspiration to try my hand at it. Ty for the rip-roaring laughs. Love and hugs, dear.

Akkina Downing

Date: 6/1/2017 7:48:00 PM

Lol... Too funny! Thanks for the laugh, Alexis :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/1/2017 8:21:00 AM

Good Morning Alexis. I for one find this a perfect Limerick in execution wit voice and tone. All of it. The theme is full of play. Poor Chuck and yes poor June for she was misguided (lol). Have a wonderful morning and day. Well done

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2017 2:34:00 AM

- A good one, Alexis :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf

Date: 5/31/2017 10:11:00 PM

Haha! Great limerick, Alexis! I needed that today!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/31/2017 8:39:00 PM

Poor Chuck, hilarious limerick!

Chris Green

Date: 5/31/2017 8:29:00 PM

Ha, what some won't do for a little cosmetic correcting. This was cute Alexis. It made me smile.

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/31/2017 8:34:00 PM

Hi Chris, I'm glad I was able to make you smile. Many of my smiles came from your skillful pen.Thanks for being so supportive and encouraging. I appreciate you being the first to comment:-) Alexis