Big Bow Tie

There was a guy with a wandering eye He walked around town with a big bow tie A colorful wardrobe It’s seen around the globe One day his ex decked him and said goodbye So he packed up and bought a mobile home He didn't have a care and was free to roam Parked near an open field Robbers came, had to yield Hitch hiked home, but ex moved on with Jerome Alexis Y. 02/26/2021

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2021 8:06:00 AM

So the score was evened out in the end. Creative work. Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/28/2021 4:29:00 PM

Did his wardrobe include tan shoes with pink shoelaces, and a big panama with a purple hat band? Good write.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/28/2021 3:01:00 AM

That is life I suppose ...

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/27/2021 6:28:00 PM

His ex decked hin, eh?! Served him right, I guess... :) gw

Rico Leffanta

Date: 2/27/2021 11:13:00 AM

Jerome is an old mining ghost town in Arizona, now occupied by starving artists and forlorn lovers with many of their homes sliding down the hill, just like their lives! Great write! Aloha! Rico

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/27/2021 9:43:00 AM

LOL...from the BOZOlike bowtie (did he have squeeky shoes too?) to finding out his ex moved in with Jerome! Love it! Happy Weekend, Alexis!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/27/2021 4:12:00 AM

Adorable. Enjoyed. Love to you and God's blessings too. Love, Gina

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/26/2021 10:55:00 PM

Very cute. And with a lesson too. Great limericks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/26/2021 6:23:00 PM

lol very cute one, Alexis, :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/26/2021 6:07:00 PM

Guess it was the guy’s wandering eye that was the reason he got decked by the ex. Great limericks for the contest ~ Belle :-)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/26/2021 2:40:00 PM

Quite a tale, Alexis! Janice

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/26/2021 2:27:00 PM

Good one, Alexis. Guess he lost everything when his mobile home was stolen. But I'd like to know more about Jerome :) Best wishes for a great win in Tania's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/26/2021 1:54:00 PM

Alexis, what an excellent, hilarious Limerick this is, and definitely a winner! I have never attempted writing one of these but you make it seem so effortless! Good luck in the contest, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/26/2021 1:17:00 PM

Fun read Alexis. He will keep trying. All the best.

Judy Ball

Date: 2/26/2021 11:54:00 AM

Cute one Alexis.\ He got what he deserved. This gave me a giggle. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/26/2021 11:21:00 AM

- :))) the ex was tired of his colorful life :) - Best wishes in the contest, Alexis :) - hugs and happe weekend // Anne-Lise :)