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Bid On My Love - If You Dare

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I will demand every piece of you offered to me and still want more And you must promise I will be the only woman you love and adore I will entrust to you my heart and soul, to the measure of ten fold When I vow my love to you it will be forever ~ to have and to hold

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Skat A

Date: 12/16/2015 12:43:00 AM

Lin, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT**

Lin Lane
Date: 12/16/2015 3:32:00 AM

Thanks, skat.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2015 6:28:00 PM

so romantic!! Congrats to you.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2015 6:43:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Andrea.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/14/2015 5:38:00 PM

Very nice Lin as always. Congrats on your win.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2015 5:53:00 PM

Many thanks, John.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2015 3:42:00 PM

very beautiful Lin many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2015 4:25:00 PM

Merci beaucoup!

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 12/14/2015 10:20:00 AM

lovely and romantic Lin.. Congrats on the win :) Love and hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2015 4:25:00 PM

Thank you so much.Rem

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/14/2015 10:15:00 AM

Congrats on your placement Lin! After all we don't believe in halves!!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2015 4:24:00 PM

Thanks, Balveen.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/14/2015 9:53:00 AM

Lin, congrats on your placement in the "bid on my love" contest:-) Alexis

Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2015 9:58:00 AM

Thanks a whole lot, Alexis.;)

James Inman

Date: 12/14/2015 9:08:00 AM

You should always expect at least as much as you're willing to give and make it clear in the beginning, I like your straight forwardness, Lin, great write.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2015 9:34:00 AM

Thank you very much, James. Honesty is a shortcut that could prevent a lot of heartache. ;)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/14/2015 7:45:00 AM

Great win, Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/14/2015 8:34:00 AM

Thank you, Eve.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/29/2015 10:48:00 AM

How can he resist this dare...it would be a win win both ways. Terrific romantic write Lin. Hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 11/29/2015 11:22:00 AM

Thank you very much, Cecilia. If he's scared away, I wouldn't want him..lol

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 11/28/2015 8:43:00 PM

Awesome...vry demanding....power pack.....bt if I were a boy I wld be scared...lol...gl

Lin Lane
Date: 11/29/2015 5:47:00 AM

lol Rizwana...but I'm giving back 10 times what I'm getting. Thanks for reading this one.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/28/2015 5:38:00 PM

Dear Lin Lane Your safe with me girl, I'm not a bidder on your love, but I'd be honored with your friendship OMG, great poem though, women were born to be worshiped by the male sex right lol, take care my friend, cheri

Lin Lane
Date: 11/28/2015 6:43:00 PM

Well that reply went in the wrong place.. sorry cherl...but you and are definitely friends..and you're right! Thank you for such nice comments.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/28/2015 6:42:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Alexis.

Abdul Malik

Date: 11/28/2015 4:57:00 PM

The second line of "...the only woman" is kind of tricky! If you bend the rule a little, I am okay with the rest! lol. Nicely done.

Lin Lane
Date: 11/28/2015 6:45:00 PM

We're talking about intimate love... I'm a one man woman, and if I ever fall in love again he'd better be a one woman man. There's no rule bending in marriage. Glad you're ok with the rest.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/28/2015 2:14:00 PM

Lin, so beautiful and romantic. Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Lin Lane
Date: 11/28/2015 6:44:00 PM

Thank you lots. Alexis