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Beyond the Head Space

00:06 aka late Rain on my window Fuzzy head I know the morning comes But I'm here In a moment And moments really are beautiful We all chase bigger things But stop me if I'm wrong You can taste a moment It's worth salivating over There's story in-between Of course there is But tonight beyond 19:00 I was ok Nestled in the safety of the words "You are too harsh on yourself" Please put those words in a cone Serve it up as ice cream... That last bit... Dunno. 00:11

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Karen Jones

Date: 10/18/2023 5:51:00 PM

This is cool. I like how it unfolds. You always think and write outside the box. It is refreshing.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/18/2023 10:51:00 PM

Thank you Karen - it's the only box I've got and supportive comments like yours help me not worry too much that I'm being too strange x

John Lawless

Date: 10/18/2023 4:31:00 PM

I always enjoy a poem that has a time element to capture its intensity. Nice job DD

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/18/2023 10:49:00 PM

John, you'd love the ones I've never written! Once my husband timed me eating spaghetti bolognese - 9 minutes from me walking out of the kitchen to walking back in with my plate. I've kept quiet on that little story for 20 years so shh it's a secret. (Thanks!)