Beyond Ocean Depth

       Beyond Ocean Depth

7 miles carried off by ocean waves
Drowning on my final days

Waking up with seaweed on the lips
Aimlessly traveling down another trip

The question dare not to ask
A journeys life ending my task

I see no butterflies, on my endless walk
Crossing shadows with a tormented talk

With no fear to all that appears
suddenly it disappears 

Gazing evil in its eye
A slow-motion cry

Pacing at the edge of all things
Entering a "Devil's realm" of the  Ying

A low beam within the sun
Stepping in a sandbox of fun

My life dragged right back into quicksand
Where as a child she let go of my hand

Wondering deeper in my invented abyss
Where I followed a  kiss not to resist

Without the guilt to grasp for air
I observed something no one should bare

My body lost in the ocean drift
Hiding away at the bottom of oil mist

Sadness hit harder when reliving my life in a flash
Knowing exactly  when my life hit in a tragic crash

Drowning in the depth of an ocean spill
A careless destine joining those with no will


Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 8/21/2016 8:09:00 PM
This gives a real feeling of floating and yet sadness and tragedy. Just like the mystery the sea holds. I was lost in the drift of the words. Love, SuZ
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Date: 2/2/2016 4:35:00 AM
I chose to read this as the first poem from your works. Life is really like an ocean and it's sheer immensity often leads us...well. .to our death! Anyway, that's food for a discussion. Meanwhile, may I forward my appreciation for such a beautiful poem. It speaks volumes about your poetic prowess and as a newcomer here, I will surely be going through all the other pieces gradually. Hope you have got my mail.
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Date: 12/6/2015 8:55:00 AM
Wow! Such depth.
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Date: 6/18/2014 10:30:00 PM
SKAT What a wonderfully creative and unique write. Kept me enthralled from beginning to end. Thank you for the great comment on my Cheating Heart poem.
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Date: 11/24/2013 12:23:00 AM
Hi my dearest sis Skat! Coming back to read & enjoy again this poem of urs. I've got more time 2day @ soup. This is my 2nd time to read it and loving it so much as always. A n outstanding masterpiece w/c extraordinarily & very creatively crafted by U. Kudos & hugging this again in every way. TYSM! Hope u're always doing fine. TYSM also for your nice comments on my poem for Saver. Have a great wkend! Pls. say Hi to our dearest sis Linda for me pls. TY! Biggest hugs! lovem4evrLeo
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Date: 10/24/2013 2:29:00 PM
This sounds like one of those bad dreams that you just can't wake up from. Except, it's reality...An awesome poem with amazing imagery!...Thank you for all of the great comments, SKAT! They are very much appreciated! :)
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Date: 7/26/2013 5:31:00 AM
This was high engaging Skat.Kudos on this one.
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Date: 7/6/2013 6:57:00 PM
This is so amazing & highly creative/imaginative write my dearest Skat! I'm so glad to drop by here this morning to read one of your masterpieces/gems! Hugging you warmly with so much joy & gratefulness. Thank you, thank you so much! Wishing you & your love ones & family all the best in life! Have a blessed weekend! May God bless you all always! lovem4ever, Leonora
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Date: 3/27/2013 6:32:00 PM
SKay, Wonderful imagination with being hauled off into the sea for miles, reminds me of the Life of Pi, but so much nicer in poetry.
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Date: 10/29/2010 7:18:00 AM
STUNNING!!! (";)
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Date: 8/22/2010 1:54:00 AM
That is really good, hope mine turn out as good as this. From PoemBlast P.S. Hope to be reading more when i get chance.
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Date: 7/23/2010 4:22:00 AM
mmmm so creative with laced with original metaphors...^_^ v
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Date: 7/21/2010 10:48:00 PM
lVery imaginative Irma. Thanks for your commnets on my poem. Love, joyce
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Date: 7/20/2010 9:09:00 PM
cool poem! Irma! and thanks for the comments! jimbo
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Date: 7/14/2010 7:29:00 PM
we all feel adrift at times...good one! Irma! and thanks for your feedback! jimbo
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Date: 7/3/2010 7:16:00 AM
Wow, awesome imagery Irma -rgds Wilma
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:24:00 PM
EXCELLENT poetry -- captivating. A double thanks for sharing it! :D -Grace
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Date: 6/29/2010 7:58:00 PM
Wow, I don't know how to explain this but I am going to give this my best try. There is something about your writing that makes me want to reread it, it is intriging and adventurous for only a few short lines of a peom, I loved it! .... Allison
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Date: 6/29/2010 8:31:00 AM
Great lines ...I feel such abandoment and insecurity ... Love this read sarah x
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Date: 6/24/2010 10:22:00 PM
IRma are you ok? haven't heard from you in ages!!
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Date: 6/23/2010 12:02:00 PM
has someone wrote on georgia yet? I would like to have it if possible for the contest. thanks
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Date: 6/22/2010 3:15:00 PM
are you doing okay, Irma. no poems for a while. just stopped by to see how a poet friend was doing. take care, & have a nice night.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 6/22/2010 11:02:00 AM
you have soup mail...
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Date: 6/22/2010 10:53:00 AM
This is beautiful ,Irma! Really enjoyed this one!:)Kisses, Emily
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Date: 6/15/2010 8:51:00 PM
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