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Bewildering Blue

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Amidst the Ocean blue, cerulean skies of a bewitching brew, Indigo love coming through, ambient azure is right on cue… Transfixed to the beryl breeze, kisses like a typhoon tease, Neptune does appease, in his tranquility of the seven seas. Dreams of the titan teal, treasures of the oceans do conceal, Sirens rejoicing in their squeal, murmuring mermaids to reveal… Cobalt cascading in the deep, turquoise tanning as we sleep, Ultramarine universes in a leap, spewing navy nebulae as to peep. Aug.05.2019 Devotion to Ocean Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke Ambient Music & Ocean Waves Deep Sleep Music Collective With female virtual voice Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/10/2019 7:39:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful :-) x

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/17/2019 8:35:00 PM

So beautiful! Congratulations, WW!

John Hamilton

Date: 8/16/2019 9:46:00 AM

Great write WW, you KNOW I love internal rhymes of which you are the master, congrats on your top win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/16/2019 3:25:00 AM

- ... not a surprise .... :) - Congratulations on your well deserved 1 place, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/15/2019 11:29:00 PM

I love your rhyming scheme on this delightful poem...like a typhoon tease. Congrats on a top win. completely captivating.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/15/2019 9:43:00 PM

Great imagery my friend an artist in your pen. Congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs

Ashmi Sheth

Date: 8/15/2019 8:18:00 PM

Wow! Beautiful! Congratulations! :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/15/2019 3:43:00 PM

This is so lovely WW! I can see why it is honored with First placement. Congratulations my friend! xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/7/2019 11:43:00 AM

^WW^ my friend, your poem is amazing! Your poems belong in a published book on a bookshelf of the finest bookstore on this planet - just WOW! I love holidaying by the sea, and hearing the waves, as I hear them in your video. This has to win! Awesome write. Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/6/2019 8:18:00 AM

Great poem, I expect it will do well.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/6/2019 7:38:00 AM

This is beautiful to read today WW :)

David Mchattie

Date: 8/5/2019 8:35:00 PM

Lovely cadence. I can hear the rolling waves. Nicely done. Have a great day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/5/2019 4:23:00 PM

I love this! Often have a hard time reading long lines but yours keep my attention! I love the sea!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/5/2019 2:33:00 PM

There is something magical about the waves, the melody of the sea. The tender touch of the wind, upon soft lullaby skin. Your thoughts take me there. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. My Warrior with Wings. :) Brandy

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/5/2019 1:21:00 PM

Love the descriptive language in this, WW! Beautiful! Blessings, Kim

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/5/2019 12:44:00 PM

Hello Winged Warrior, oh I love this poem. You made me feel peaceful. have a nice day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/5/2019 11:56:00 AM

- Not often do I read poems with King Neptune the ruler of the sea ... K. Neptune is always ready, for new adventures ... he loves mermaids .... (don't tell it to his beautiful wife Queen Amphitrite :) ... and beautiful colorful poems, W.W. :) - I bet: TOP WINNING POEM ! :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)