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her back against wall; nowhere to run. bricks close in, hardly the sun. the last light will be a spark — terror triggers final bullet of Fall. window panes like empty pews look on with wan faces. enemy’s close, whites of mine eyes camouflaged over; uniform green relegates retinas. what petrifies more - the sands before or after time? in nightmares, surely the steady aim and the click makes one sick. pillow of bright white, boxed in. wake up...wake up 11/9/2020

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Date: 11/17/2020 3:03:00 PM
Very much enjoyed reading and liked this . I especially love the line or verse Petrified of sand before or after time Found myself been contemplating and writting about this myself
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Date: 11/17/2020 9:03:00 AM
Thank God it was just a nightmare, I was wondering where the ending was taking us. A wonderfully creative write my friend Kim. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/17/2020 1:01:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! Even nightmares can form a poem.
Date: 11/14/2020 9:16:00 PM
I have nightmares too but few are like yours, Kim. Mine are dreams mostly based on my being a concert pianist playing Mozart piano concertoes, or figure skating and pulling off spectacular jumps, or dreams of famous places I've visited and people I've never met before? Bizarre. Interesting poem. / Maurice
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Date: 11/14/2020 7:18:00 PM
My heart was pounding with fear as I read Kim. I felt chased.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2020 5:32:00 AM
Wow!
Date: 11/13/2020 6:19:00 AM
Weird coincidence Kim I was writing a poem do not disturb, my idea of heaven, about not wanting to wake up from a beautiful dream, whilst your screaming wake up from a nightmare, what a strange Dichotomy, enjoyed this one very much and can fully relate to it, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/13/2020 9:42:00 AM
Do not disturb Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2020 8:04:00 AM
I will check yours out! What is the title?Thank you, David!
Date: 11/12/2020 5:40:00 AM
Kim, oh nightmares I know about and that last wake up ... wake up sums it up, well done _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2020 5:46:00 AM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 11/11/2020 2:04:00 AM
No sweet dreams tonight ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/11/2020 4:13:00 AM
That one wasn’t...hope yours are :)
Date: 11/10/2020 1:52:00 AM
Loved your poem but let me sleep a little more :) ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2020 4:13:00 AM
LOL...hugs for you Victor. Get your rest. Thinking of you.
Date: 11/9/2020 8:39:00 PM
So many powerful words and phrases in this. I hope you don't suffer claustrophobia. ~ John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2020 4:15:00 AM
Only when I go to the mall...lol, but give me a cave or cavern, even with water and I’m in love.
Date: 11/9/2020 4:49:00 PM
Some dreams feels so real they lump the body. Great poem, Kim, I enjoyed it a lot. xoxo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2020 4:16:00 AM
For sure. Thank you, Akkina!
Date: 11/9/2020 3:57:00 PM
Ooooh, this is good, my friend. Love the suggestions of terror, so artfully penned. Kudos, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2020 4:16:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 11/9/2020 10:40:00 AM
Enjoyed reading, Kim, hard for me to write verses without us extra words. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2020 4:17:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!

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