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Between Dawn and Day

A flower pokes through urban blight and decay in the crevice between dawn and day Beams, 'Look at me' I've made it through Now it's your turn ~ I d-a-r-e you

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Valsa George

Date: 11/28/2022 9:20:00 PM

Through adverse situations, some find survival and amaze the world. So well written, dear friend .

Bill Baker

Date: 11/27/2022 9:41:00 AM

Enticing challenge my friend. Well written enjoyable poetry, Gershon. Have a great week! Bill

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/27/2022 2:03:00 PM

Thank you for the support, Bill! ~ gw

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/26/2022 11:25:00 AM

H Gershon, a flower peeps through a crevice on urban turf bravely thinking it can survive alas, as but a few hours later it is no more but, you made it through with sunlight's , beams, knew urban turf not for you, the beams guidEd you and you made it through. Followed the Beams some time ago, I made it too. We made it through the crevices of life. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/27/2022 2:03:00 PM

You have made it, Jennifer. Congrats... I, on the other hand, got stuck in a crevice. Like Winnie the Pooh, I ate too much honey. ~ Roly-Poly

Deb M

Date: 11/25/2022 4:51:00 PM

Love this one Big Bad really lovely my friend….Debx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/27/2022 1:59:00 PM

Big Bad is doing his best. lol. Happiness and Joy, gw

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/24/2022 6:41:00 AM

nice one, gershon! i love the idea of "between dawn and day..."

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2022 8:28:00 PM

Fits nicely into crevices and cracks, doesn't it? ~ Day dawns...