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You Promised Me

You promised me, was in despair But, you had other things to care You told me you could not adjourn I waited, you showed no concern Hope those regrets you could repair. Hold me in arms when end is near You keep my wish in your prayer Time we lost will never return You promised me. Make death a beautiful affair I shall rest in peace with no fear Such a blissful end I do yearn Though my life turned out little stern I trust your love, will you be there? You promised me. CONTEST NO 212 any form-theme max of 16 lines . Sponsored by: Brian Strand July 13, 2016. Best Rondeau Poem - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Laura Loo Rondeau Rhyme Scheme: AABBA-AABC-AABBAC EIGHT Syllables in each line except the 4th line in second stanza ( C ) and the last line in the third stanza. ( C ) They have FOUR syllables and is the repeated refrain from the first four syllables in stanza one. Received SECOND place in the contest.

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Date: 9/18/2016 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations Meenakshi, on such a well deserved win.
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Date: 9/18/2016 9:06:00 PM
Congratulations, Meenakshi. Beautiful! ...Fran
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Date: 9/18/2016 5:56:00 PM
Oh how I loved this one Meenakshi! The flow was perfect and the rhyme flawless...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 7/15/2016 6:33:00 AM
Well done Meenakshi, congratulations...
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Date: 7/15/2016 5:19:00 AM
Congrats Meenakshi, for your top placement with this lovely piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/15/2016 3:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Meenakshi:) Lovely write:)
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Date: 7/14/2016 12:15:00 PM
Hi Meenakshi, You have penned such a well written write. Congrats on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 7/14/2016 2:19:00 PM
Thank you Alexis...
Date: 7/14/2016 11:43:00 AM
Meenakshi, such a lovely poem and exactly what I was looking for. congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 7/14/2016 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Laura...

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