Notes About The Poem

Published: 22nd September 2024

Photo: gR


Berlin

this nonconformist city
breathes a calm but edgy air
through gaps in the graffiti 
and the street art everywhere

its face is sometimes brutal
but its heart and soul seem not
and it walks a sexy diverse walk
that’s cold yet somehow hot

(but I know I’m getting older
when those fun thoughts in my head
reject the swinging KitKatClub
for KitKat bars instead)

and all those wearing AirPods
sipping hot drinks on the go
pass tourists taking boat trips
slowly going with the flow

while the 'high tea' of a bratwurst
served from food trucks on the street
is eaten at tall tables
en plein air without a seat

and just like high end stores at home
the windows dress up nice
displaying priceless dresses
that are shown without their price

note too that no one jaywalks here
by crossing roads at will
not even during rush hour 
when the traffic’s standing still

and when it comes to bridges
here’s a fact that crossed my mind:
there are more here than in Venice
and in Amsterdam combined

and by saving time by taking trams
that move berlin about
we spent time taking time in parks
where locals take time out

while the aiming and the shooting
by the wall towards the west
was just us aiming cell phones
shooting selfies with the rest.


but the death camp films and clothes we saw

of the many that were killed

brought tears that drowned a silence there 

for the blood that humans spilled

and I cannot start to comprehend

the minds of those who kill

and just because I went there

- and just because I stood there

- and just because I wrote this

doesn’t mean I ever will.
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Fowler Avatar
February 27, 2026 at 1:37 PM
Hi Gary. I have visited Berlin several times real times and it is amazing and paradoxical. Parts of the city are alive and busy, others are solemn and dim. Nice write! :)
Radice Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 1:07 AM
Hi Linda. Many thanks for your continued support via your comments. I understand what you mean about the different parts of the city. We've stayed in both the old West Germany area and the old East Germany area (Where all of the trams run) and I have to say that there is something about the brutalist architecture that stirs the poet in me. Thanks again. Cheers - Gary
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February 6, 2026 at 3:12 PM
I just reread your wonderful poem, after a year or two. Those last lines are so strong and important. If only they could instill in minds that war is evil, doesn't work, and everyone loses. Thank you for writing them...Ann
Radice Avatar
February 7, 2026 at 2:56 AM
Thank you Ann. Lovely to hear from you. It's a poem and city I hold close to my heart. Cheers - Gary
Miller Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 2:41 PM
I have a piece of the wall, chipped off by a friend, and I am old enough to have a "Checkpoint Charlie" stamp in one of my passports I also, in a small window of time, drove my car under the Brandenburg gate but I love Cologne and Nuremburg where I met my (American) wife and I can park my car where hateful rallies were once held. Great poem Gary I must read more
Radice Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 9:40 PM
Apologies Terry for not replying sooner to your great comments. I don't visit these boards as much as I once did. I can understand why Germany must hold a very special place in your heart. Thanks for reading. Cheers - Gary
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 11:05 AM
Expresses my feelings when I first viewed The Wall. So well done, as your typical style. Thanks you Gary. :)
Radice Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 12:57 PM
Thank you Linda. We love Berlin. Cheers - Gary
Sambourne Avatar
January 25, 2025 at 7:21 PM
Your poem, Gary, catches much that is the hurly-burly of Berlin. Such a fine write that takes us from Kit-Kat humour to the Holocaust memorials. I've only been to Berlin for a short stop over of 3 days. However, the Berlin you write of is much with me. All the best. Brian
Radice Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 3:35 AM
Thanks Brian. Yes, I wanted a humorous (High tea on tall tables etc) and somewhat whimsical approach at first to capture the every day hurly-burly so as to set up and amplify the total devastation and horror of the Holocaust at the end. I’ll be popping over to your page in the week..Thanks again. Cheers - Gary
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January 8, 2025 at 10:51 PM
Wow Gary, this was written so perfectly, I was able to see Berlin and feel the energy of the city without ever being there. I am glad they are not hiding the horrific past, and by all I have seen, those that live now are very unhappy how horrible things were. Oh, I remember when that wall was taken down, how wonderful it no longer divides the people, that was a tragic thing, that wall. Glad it's a place of art now. Your last lines were beautiful. I cannot comprehend those who kill either.
Radice Avatar
January 9, 2025 at 2:34 AM
Thank you Bj. I wanted to capture the essence, atmosphere and sheer excitement without shying away from its past. Like yourself, I, too am happy that the city doesn’t hide its past. Cheers - Gary
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January 5, 2025 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Brian's contest. Creative and expressive lines. Thanks for sharing this winner with us. Sara K
Radice Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 11:13 AM
Hi Sara. Thanks for reading it. Much appreciated. All the best. Cheers - Gary
Ashley Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 11:19 AM
Dear Gary, your amazing poem draws dual reactions. I adore your potent, appreciative and revealing verse that captures the essence of a vibrant city as well as your humane response to its dark past. I admire how Berlin keeps its history alive and in full view in the light of unflinching truth. Truth honors the horrific suffering of all the innocents needlessly lost. Burying a nation's dark history only serves to empower those who wish to repeat it. Warmest wishes for a happy new year my poet friend.. ~Susan
Radice Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 1:45 PM
Happy New Year Susan to you and your family and thank you for your insightful, profound and lovely comments. I certainly wouldn't rate 2024 as a favourite year of mine but I would rate Berlin - a city we visited in September of '24 - as one of my favourite destinations. Cheers - Gary
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November 29, 2024 at 6:09 PM
Gary, making this a fave. I also find it impossible to understand how these violent acts can happen. It seems so foreign to me. We should be living in a state of permanent peace, and hopefully we shall. It takes people to work for it. Smiles!
Radice Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 2:02 AM
Thanks Duke. Steinbeck was right when he said: "All war is a symptom of man's failure as a thinking animal". Kudos to him. Cheers - Gary
Debole Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 12:00 PM
Hi Gary, Your poem is a treasure. Thanks for sharing your experience and feelings with us. Your description of the city shows promise and progress. The end of your poem shows the depth of your feelings. Good to see progress with remembrance of the past. Paves the way to better times for all.
Radice Avatar
November 26, 2024 at 10:29 PM
Thank you Gail. One thing I found really difficult to grasp was seeing the remnants of the wall and reminding myself that it was built in the year I was born and dismantled not long before my 28th birthday. How the heck people managed to live with it for all those years is beyond me. Berlin, thankfully today, is an exciting, bustling, tourist friendly metropolitan city. Cheers - Gary
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November 25, 2024 at 4:27 AM
Dear Gary, this is so heartfelt and so beautiful how youv written about berlin, ive been to Berlin too and i think its a very disciplined city and beautiful one too, also hamburg too is a lovely place. Your ending made me feel alot and i agree too that just because we been to certain places or seen certain places we can never really truly comprehend the depth of what is written in history. Hope i didnt think too deep there. Pleasure reading this, sending you light
Radice Avatar
November 25, 2024 at 9:59 AM
Hi Inky No, you didn't think too deep there at all. I suspect many cities have very dark histories. Berlin doesn't hide its past and has many excellent and very well curated museums that don't flinch from telling it how it really once was. Thank you for your visit. Cheers - Gary
Canerdy Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 6:15 AM
Gary, this excellent, vividly descriptive piece is informative and so moving~~contrasting the peaceful scenes of the present with the horrors of the past. Janice
Radice Avatar
November 24, 2024 at 6:41 AM
Thanks Janice. The past is so difficult to take in. We spent much of our 4 days away visiting galleries and museums. Great shopping too. Cheers - Gary
Oldham Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 2:55 PM
Just seeing this, Gary. Really great piece of work here describing the modern scene, all of it juxtaposed against the horrors of the past. I never will, either. Best, John
Radice Avatar
November 23, 2024 at 9:14 PM
Thanks John. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Cheers - Gary
Peck Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 8:33 AM
Oh Gary, Another wonderful poem! I loved your description of Berlin, a city I've never visited, but I love your last few lines the best They touched my heart.
Radice Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 12:33 PM
Thank you Ann. I don't think I have seen so much graffiti in any city anywhere than I have in Berlin..and yet..it didn't feel threatening..we viewed it as art. It was certainly art we saw on the remnants of the Berlin wall. I wanted my whimsical poem to end with a kick so I'm glad it touched your heart. Thanks again Ann. Cheers - Gary
Allison Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 12:48 PM
my son has visited 3 times he loves the galleries and museums and culture, I love the way you have written of the present and the past - the atrocities are something we should never forget. hugs Jan xx I love amsterdam for that very reason especially Anne frank's Museum which I have visited 3 times x
Radice Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 1:31 PM
Hi Jan. Ann and I tend to take short city breaks nowadays rather than any full blown beach holiday and just love doing so. Amsterdam that you’ve mentioned is a wonderful city and we’re off to Prague in a few weeks. Your son has great taste. The galleries and the museums on the island in Berlin are superb. Cheers - Gary
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November 9, 2024 at 10:16 AM
I am of German descent, but have never been to visit the country. Your clever poem has taken me there and the journey was just delightful from beginning to end... An excellent piece of poetry, Gary :)
Radice Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 11:37 AM
Thank you Kelly. Germany is a beautiful country and Berlin is such an exciting city. It helps that it's one of the cheapest European capitals to visit. We are planning to visit again. Cheers - Gary
Williams Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 3:46 AM
This is a brilliant piece of work Gary, and a marvellous travelogue - I'm so glad I saw it, and only because of your POTD. Your last verse and last few lines are classic. Thanks for sharing your travels. Maria
Radice Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 5:16 AM
Much appreciated Maria. We only spent 3 nights in Berlin recently but we saw enough that could write an anthology of poems. :) Cheers - Gary
Cornish Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 2:44 PM
Gary, this is an exceptional journey with a fine artist of thought and rhyme and meter - I must read and respect you more - you very much deserve it---I got lost in this composition!
Radice Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 10:48 PM
High praise indeed Craig. Thank you. It's very much appreciated. I want to add one other verse somewhere in the mix that refers to a 1910 quote from German author Karl Scheffler. He described Berlin as “a city condemned forever to becoming and never to being”. Im not quite there yet with the verse but I'm working on it. That said though, maybe I can refer to the quote indirectly by just simply leaving things as they are? :) Cheers - Gary
Hind Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 7:23 PM
Amazing poetry, Gary...wow, I really like your style....:)
Radice Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 12:45 AM
Thanks Paige. I tend to write just what I see and remember. Sir Andrew Motion / English poet and novelist who was Poet Laureate of the United Kingdom from 1999 to 2009 recommends to "Honour the miraculousness of the ordinary" I liked observing some of the ordinary in the extraordinary city of Berlin. :) Cheers - Gary
Crandall Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 3:26 PM
A great, evocative, word picture you've painted. I would have to say that a little dark chocolate is enough excitement for me these days, too, and the holocaust - unfathomable.
Radice Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 12:52 AM
Thanks David. Hey if you've never tried it before Berlin chocolate is lovely. I would recommend a visit to the Berlin coffee roastery located on Uhlandstraße for all bars of chocolate. Wonderful! Although that said, my local Tesco probably sells it too. :) Cheers - Gary
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September 28, 2024 at 9:22 AM
What a great image with play on words throughout, skillful write. I haven’t visited it. (In Sorrento right now instead :)
Radice Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 9:38 AM
Thanks Margarita. We love Sorrento! Enjoy. :) Cheers - Gary
Callus Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 7:38 AM
This poem of yours is written from the heart and I can sense a feeling of longing as you recall a mixture of memories. The end part is touching. (Well done for the metrical delivery.) a fav ~ Regards // paul
Radice Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 12:59 PM
Thank you Paul. Yes, from the heart alright. We got home 2 weeks ago from Berlin so the images are still very vivid in my mind. Tbh I suspect they will remain so for a long time to come. Thanks again. Much appreciated. Cheers - Gary
Wolf Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 8:22 PM
'Heavy' and profound penning here, Gary. The puzzling contradictions in cities such as Berlin confound all sensitive sols... ~ Gershon
Radice Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 1:01 AM
Indeed Gershon. Away from confronting its past Berlin offers up a great city break with its art scene, music, theatre and great food. It’s also one of the cheapest capital cities we have been to in comparison with the likes of London, Paris, Copenhagen and Vienna. Thanks for your comments. Cheers - Gary
Rose  Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 7:20 PM
It really is a difficult thing to understand Gary, perhaps we never will , great poem
Radice Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 12:57 AM
Thank you! I have to applaud Berlin for not shying away from its past with its museums and memorials that are expertly curated. Luckily the flight is just short of two hours from where we live so another trip is on the cards. Thanks M R R. :) Cheers - Gary
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September 25, 2024 at 12:40 PM
I loved reading your "Berlin" write. What a great picture. I have never been but I feel I took the vacation with you both. My dad was there many years. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
Radice Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 12:55 PM
Thank you Paula. I wanted a whimsical approach at first, to take readers for a walk through my words so as to set up the end. Berlin, for me is a city of contradictions but makes for a great city break. Cheers - Gary
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