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I’ve sated them on sonnets succulent and wonder now just where the hell they went familiarity – it breeds contempt abandons me to keyboard – passion spent My muse, in mourning black, wanders forlorn a naked sheep unknowingly full shorn sits shivering, alone, awaiting dawn befuddled by her role as writing’s pawn She scans the distant fields for those who left protects the gentle soul they left bereft of wooly words – of phrases - to console lost lovers in a world they can’t control Ah poetry, the marrow of my bones your words the subtle mantra of its tones ©7/12/2018 for Abandon2 – Poetry Contest sponsor – Brenda Chiri Super Sonnet Premium Contest John Hamilton

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Date: 12/17/2018 1:25:00 PM
Your beautiful winning entry is very much worthy of being on the winners' list, John. Well done & congratulations. Regards // paul
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Date: 12/17/2018 12:05:00 PM
This is a wonderful sonnet John, one of my faves from you. Loved everything about this write, what an amazing metaphor you used, along with spectacular word selection! A very worthy winner in this MOST difficult to judge contest.
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Date: 12/17/2018 11:51:00 AM
Simply beautiful. Congrats.
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Date: 7/27/2018 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautifully written. :)
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Date: 7/27/2018 5:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, John . I enjoyed reading this well written poem with great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/25/2018 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win John :) xomo!
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Date: 7/25/2018 8:48:00 AM
Beautifully expressed! Congrats on top spot.
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Date: 7/25/2018 4:53:00 AM
This is one of your best John! ...It touched my poet's soul! Congratulations on your deserving first placement! : )
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:48:00 PM
ahh, you took such a creative outlook on this topic. GREAT job. I do love a well written sonnet.
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Date: 7/13/2018 5:16:00 AM
Great sonnet, John.. the last two lines seal it!
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