Beneath the Vines

As the sun sets beneath a lonely hill,
and shadows begin to lengthen and fall.
Twixt headstones laid for centuries will,
with carved names ‘n date, tell of stories all.
Some tell of families laid side by side
as tall statues stand proudly over them.
Others, only flat stones, as if to hide,
peeking out from the vines, a hidden gem.
And some with no slab to mark their place,
too poor to be given a name or a date,
as if never part of the human race.
Did they have a child, or even a mate?

Would a stone have kept them in our minds?
There’re so many stories beneath the vines.

   


10/03/16
For the Overgrown with Vines contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Enjoyed reading your descriptive work about the picture..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
La France Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Betty, beautifully penned and CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest ~
Janko Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 6:33 PM
Thank you so much for the placement. I really enjoyed the challenge since I rarely write sad poems. Look forward to more of your temptations! Betty
Inman Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 11:46 AM
A contemplative write. Betty, your write creates an array of emotions.
Scars Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 11:22 AM
sadly beautiful sonnet Betty...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Turner Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 4:32 PM
This is a beautifully sad sonnet, Mrs Betty. Good luck in contest. Nicely penned:)
Janko Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Thanks Daniel. I usually don't like sad poems and rarely write one myself but the title of the contest inspired me.
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