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Beneath the Vines

As the sun sets beneath a lonely hill, and shadows begin to lengthen and fall. Twixt headstones laid for centuries will, with carved names ‘n date, tell of stories all. Some tell of families laid side by side as tall statues stand proudly over them. Others, only flat stones, as if to hide, peeking out from the vines, a hidden gem. And some with no slab to mark their place, too poor to be given a name or a date, as if never part of the human race. Did they have a child, or even a mate? Would a stone have kept them in our minds? There’re so many stories beneath the vines. 10/03/16 For the Overgrown with Vines contest

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Date: 10/14/2016 3:11:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your descriptive work about the picture..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2016 4:09:00 PM
Betty, beautifully penned and CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest ~
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Betty Janko
Date: 10/9/2016 6:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for the placement. I really enjoyed the challenge since I rarely write sad poems. Look forward to more of your temptations! Betty
Date: 10/9/2016 11:46:00 AM
A contemplative write. Betty, your write creates an array of emotions.
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:22:00 AM
sadly beautiful sonnet Betty...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/3/2016 4:32:00 PM
This is a beautifully sad sonnet, Mrs Betty. Good luck in contest. Nicely penned:)
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Betty Janko
Date: 10/3/2016 5:18:00 PM
Thanks Daniel. I usually don't like sad poems and rarely write one myself but the title of the contest inspired me.

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