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Beneath the Copper Trees

Enhanced by peaceful solitude, in twilight, crimson crowned
She stood in tensile grace, unmoved.  Enchantment in disguise
Lightly splashed by back light, where the tender grass had grown

A white tailed doe, was grazing there, aware and keen of eye
She perked up ears, alert for sound, yet, still she had not flown
Dare I break the silent calm, with breath or just a sigh?

Or take a step, in chance my foot might rustle twig or loam?
This stance of wills,...intense and poised.  Would she dare to flee?
She perked up ears, alert for sound, yet still she had not flown

A monumental moment, as she stood before my eyes
First stabbed by startled fear, new trust came pouring down
There, in tensile grace she stood, enchantment in disguise 

Caressed in beauty, and sun embraced, revealed for me alone
Dare I break the silent calm, with breath or just a sigh?
First stabbed by startled fear, new trust came pouring down

Eyes made of glass, as windows are, in which the iris tongue
We made no move...each one transfixed, no air in lungs to breathe
So inter-laced, with life force crossed, in universal one
Our spirits twined against the sky, beneath the copper trees


                     
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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 10:07 PM
Congratulations on your placement Carrie. This was lovely! ; )
Scars Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Carrie, I fell in love with this right away...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
A  Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 4:10 PM
Carrie, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Lamoureux Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 7:56 AM
Memorizing, congratulations.
Richards Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 6:23 PM
Ahh..you are very kind, and make me feel worthy, Shadow. Thank you so much, and for letting me share this place with those who I admire so much ! :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 5:57 PM
very pleased to see this poem again Carrie it still blows me away congrats on 1st place hugs 7
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 10:23 PM
This poem is very beautiful Carrie. I see why it is a favorite of yours. Congratulations on your win!
La France Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 4:23 PM
Carrie, congratulations with your win with this wonderful poem, you painted such a beautiful picture with words, a perfect 7 . . .
Reams Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 7:40 AM
Congrats on your win!
A. Sharma Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 11:22 PM
Amazingly beautiful write Carrie!Words are less to say, Congrats on top place win!
Ebbs Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 9:04 PM
Great Job Carrie, congrats!
Allison Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 4:14 PM
absolutely delightful imagery from start to end - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
A   Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 12:30 PM
KIM, Congratulations on your awesome win..... Luv ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 2:21 PM
A NICE WINNING POEM CARRIE, CONGRATS! ;-) ~SKAT~
A   Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations in Kim M's contest... have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
Sirak Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:37 AM
Congrats on your win. Beautifully penned poem. Deer possess such fragile lovely grace and you captured it.
Hamilton Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:20 AM
blown away grats on your win Shadow
De Burca Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 5:59 AM
This is so beautiful, words almost fail me. Congrats on your win.
May Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 5:59 PM
simply beautiful.... a classic ....congrats on a great win
Hendricks Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 5:36 PM
Beautiful writing, Carrie, and certainly a well-deserved first placement in the contest. Well done, my friend. :-)
Morrison Avatar
May 31, 2013 at 5:25 PM
A beautiful piece of poetry! Thanks for submitting to my contest Kim
Roberts Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 5:45 PM
Congratulations Carrie......Seren
A  Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 11:53 AM
Carrie, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 12, 2013 at 3:48 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie luv xx
A   Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 9:52 PM
Carrie.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
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