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The stars above are shining bright, within a midnight sky. Lying with me upon the sand, as we watch stars shooting, across soft velvet. We turn our heads, eyes now locked, swimming within our loving glow. A gentle breeze whispers in your hair, your peaceful sigh, a lullaby . . . And in my dream, there is a midnight sky, with a star brighter than all others. Dark velvet envelopes my heart, oh my love for you is eternal. Mist of time, whispering in my hair, and I fall into your eyes. Lost again, under that sky and sand. And in my memory, I am with you, your peaceful sigh, a lullaby . . . _______________________________________________ March 8, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Collaboration/Beneath A Midnight Sky Copyright Protected, ID 16-765-202-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. A collaboration with Vladislav Raven

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Date: 3/26/2016 11:38:00 PM
Beautiful feelings...
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/27/2016 10:30:00 AM
Prat, thanks for visiting with the beautiful ~
Date: 3/13/2016 10:25:00 AM
wow, this indeed is an awesome collaboration, great write and a well done to you both
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/13/2016 5:40:00 PM
Sage, thanks for the awesome, I thought we wrote very well together too ~
Date: 3/9/2016 7:33:00 PM
Talk about 2 birds with 1 read! This is a beautiful collaboration! Loved it!
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/9/2016 9:12:00 PM
Arthur, thank you so much for the compliment and the beautiful !
Date: 3/9/2016 4:36:00 AM
Beautifully poetic!! I loved it?????????
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/9/2016 10:26:00 PM
Lisa, thank you for visiting with the beautiful !
Date: 3/8/2016 9:14:00 PM
Very lovely collab. Constance and Mike. Really enjoyed your weaved words.
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/9/2016 10:18:00 PM
Tim, thanks so much for visiting with the nice comment !
Date: 3/8/2016 5:22:00 PM
Hi Constance, your words do sing in the midst of a sweet dream. You make the write what it is with your Love filled words that touch the heart. A velvety night dream that sings into the heart. It has been a pleasure and honour to place my humble words with your own and i look forward to the next write. Keep singing your songs in the dark velvet night....MIKE. A seven and a fave.
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/8/2016 7:50:00 PM
Mike, thank you so much for asking me, it truly as an honor, your beautiful comment touched my soul, and thanks for the fav and the 7!
Date: 3/8/2016 4:09:00 PM
So! beautifully! expressed...., I love 'Mist of time, whispering in my hair'.
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/8/2016 8:01:00 PM
Kim, thanks for visiting with the beautiful, I love that line too!
Date: 3/8/2016 1:03:00 PM
Such a sweet serene...great collab...VR & BW...(:^WW^:)
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/8/2016 8:02:00 PM
Winged, thanks for visiting my poetry page, appreciate !
Date: 3/8/2016 12:42:00 PM
Soft, sweet song, Lovely
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/8/2016 12:43:00 PM
Charlie, thanks for visiting with the lovely!
Date: 3/8/2016 12:16:00 PM
Very Beautiful plain and simple
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/8/2016 12:19:00 PM
Brian, thank you for the beautiful!
Date: 3/8/2016 11:31:00 AM
I will forever seek this "midnight sky!"
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/8/2016 12:21:00 PM
Walter, thanks so much for visiting my poem !
Date: 3/8/2016 10:41:00 AM
Beautiful write, well done to both of you. Re-read the second line in the second stanza to make sure it's what you intended.
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Dear Heart
Date: 3/8/2016 12:25:00 PM
James, thanks for the beautiful and the compliment and for spotting my little oops! Fixed now!