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Beneath-Hiku Tanka

beneath the s s h w a o d of sea the the sea of lurks m o r t a l s u c c u m b deeper still e x p e c t a t i o n of T A L A N T ( here it is ) I /—————————-\ S / \ / \ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Date: 5/13/2025 6:31:00 AM
- Well done, Kim :) - Creative :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2025 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Loving the freedom of the hiku! Hugs
Date: 5/12/2025 8:03:00 PM
It's lost and found in your poem. :) If I am getting it right- <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2025 6:26:00 AM
The fear, delight and wonder of the seas. Hugs ~ Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2025 6:17:00 AM
The fear, delight and wonder of the seas. Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/12/2025 4:22:00 PM
Ah! There it is, but the journey there was fantastic art. Haunting. Good Job ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2025 7:48:00 PM
Thank you! Glad you liked it! xx

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