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I had a dream of you last night when sweet sleep finally came while outside the wind was blowing loud and stars were flickering above . . . you took my hand and I rose up above and became a spirit girl drifting. . . we flew over mountains high and valleys deep and green but it was so dark and silent in this dream not even a night bird song . . . then suddenly snow is caressing me as you kiss my red lips and eyelids and I touch your cold white cheek . . . oh, why is my heart beating so loud I think it will break in a thousand pieces as I press you close beloved . . . and then we are falling, swirling down . . . I cannot hold you anymore and must let go then, I am laying in the deep snow where your tomb is engraved - beloved __________________ February 13, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/Beloved Copyright Protected, ID 18-994-207-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to, Mid Summer 2018 Standard Contest Sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place

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Date: 7/6/2018 1:59:00 PM
Lovely Broken Wings, congrats. :)
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Date: 7/4/2018 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. Well done!
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Date: 7/4/2018 12:41:00 PM
Quite lovely, and very loving B.W.-- you've shown truly that love is the only thing that survives death in this world--congrats! (oh, 'you' is a typo in the last line, right?)
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Date: 2/15/2018 11:32:00 AM
It s another beautiful write, to be honest you have written it so beautifully that I m lost for words, dreams are so sweet because it s a world where everything happens as we want it to be, we are the boss, literally controlling everything but again the dreams are for only nights, in morning we again have to face the reality which isn t always pleasant and we can do nothing but cry, because once someone is gone, it s never going to come back to us, that s the sad reality of this life, good luck
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