Belief Unseen

She is not barricaded faith Nor is she candlelit belief She is not invisible Although she is unseen 10/28/20

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/21/2020 8:05:00 AM

It riddle is a riddle be, A little too much for me! Someone unseen and invisible - could it be the virus? Hugs and blessing Michelle, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/8/2020 7:14:00 PM

Wow, like a little riddle!

John Watt

Date: 11/7/2020 12:40:00 PM

I left you a longer comment at "Her Legacy", but here I will say that I think this excerpt has a great chance of winning with Greg. "Not invisible / Although she is unseen" is so rich. Enjoy your special weekend ~ John

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/5/2020 10:17:00 AM

'Not invisible, though unseen.' -- It doesn't get much more profound than this. Good luck in the contest, Michelle. Hope and Healing, Gershon

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/31/2020 6:59:00 PM

I like this a lot, Michelle. I tried to find the original to read but couldn't find it. Hope you're having a good weekend. :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/29/2020 4:57:00 AM

Beautifully done, dear friend. God bless you with a win