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Being Invisible

I am unnoticed in the world even my shadow disappears never heard never seen never needed I fill a lake with tears where I'm drowning sinking slowly in its dark void my hand floats to the surface no one grabs it it's cold... so cold invisible, even in death 4/22/16

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:50:00 AM
Frederic, Congrats on your awesome Being Invisible win...Love LINDA
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Date: 4/26/2016 10:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/26/2016 10:33:00 AM
Powerful words, Frederic. Congratulations on your fine win in this first Premiere Contest! Well done. Sandra
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Date: 4/26/2016 9:07:00 AM
Haunting and well written Frederic. Love the short lines.
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Date: 4/26/2016 8:51:00 AM
A well written one...congrats on your placement, Frederic. :)
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Date: 4/26/2016 8:32:00 AM
Small simple and to the point, Frederic, Congratulations on your Invisible win. I thank you for the entry. I have a blog up, describing the experience of running my first premiere contest. blog name--- >"My first experience was not as easy ... :( DEPRESSION" drop by and enjoy the few I did place. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 4/23/2016 8:07:00 PM
gosh, you did so well with this challenge. Why can't I do this so easily?
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Date: 4/22/2016 7:49:00 PM
Evokes the feeling quite well!
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Date: 4/22/2016 5:13:00 PM
Sent shivers down my spine - I nearly drowned in the swimming baths when I was 5 or 6:-( Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/22/2016 5:11:00 PM
Frederic, you have penned this with such emotion as if you had experienced the horror!Well done :), jill
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