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Being Human

Blank slates made of innocent love Etched with profound, faith bearing trust, Infants true, pure character of Natural heart is bound to rust Growing perceptions shown by us. Harvested from one, same, mother crop Under one shared, immense, vibrant sky, My life is your life even when life stops. All we endure, we all endure by and by. Networks of need echo in each soul’s sigh.

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/10/2016 7:22:00 PM

Congratulations. I like this poem and the echoes of the soul.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 7/10/2016 11:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win....lovely acrostic

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 7/10/2016 11:03:00 AM

Well done Connie congrats I understand yours now x

Lu Loo

Date: 7/10/2016 10:33:00 AM

CAYCAY!! YAY!! congrats on your well deserved top placement lady :) -luloo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/9/2016 10:38:00 PM

I am so happy this is a top winner CayCay! Congratulations! I loved it! : )

Eve Roper

Date: 7/9/2016 9:57:00 PM

whoo hoo !!! back to congratulate you on your 1st place win !!!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/9/2016 8:51:00 PM

Acrostic poems are always a challenge, but you nailed it perfectly, CayCay! Congratulations on your wonderful win!

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/9/2016 8:37:00 PM

Wonderful, CayCay! Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win in the 'being human' contest! 7 Hugs, Sandra

John Hamilton

Date: 7/9/2016 8:12:00 PM

Looks like I'm not the only one who thought this was a winner! Just great, congrats on shared top spot!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/9/2016 2:00:00 AM

Wow CayCay, this is incredible! My favorite line..My life is your life even when life stops...I hope this is a top winner CayCay! I love it! 7 ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2016 6:53:00 PM

So poetic and succinct, sweet friend. I sure like yours. I am picking my mom up soon. I better hurry off here and clean my kitchen really well first!!!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/8/2016 6:36:00 PM

CayCay, great poem I love your words blank slates & etched awesome words a 7 and good luck in the contest. Thank you for reading “Mystery and Seclusion” and your very kind and very inspiriting words food for my soul. Hugs Eve