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Behind That Smile

Those beautiful smiles
Sometimes have cried the most tears
Charitable hearts

Edward J Ebbs - February 22, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 28, 2016 at 7:07 AM
Ed, i Love the Haiku and it speaks such truth in such few words. Who does know what lies behind the smiles? There can be the greatest pain. A seven and a fave for an excellently worded Haiku....Vladislav.
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February 28, 2015 at 9:38 PM
love the haiku. SKAT
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March 1, 2015 at 8:17 AM
Thank You SKAT :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this is lovely!!
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February 26, 2015 at 7:00 PM
Thanks Kiddo :)
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February 23, 2015 at 9:19 AM
Ed, wisdom in a few words, how many times have I put on the mask of a smile while crying inside, or given a smile to someone I know is suffering inside,as I am sure many, many have, wonderful writing and thanks for visiting Oh The Tears with congrats ~~
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February 23, 2015 at 9:31 PM
Broken, thank you sincerely :)
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February 23, 2015 at 12:31 AM
Great work. The best smiles are the ones powered by love, sincerity and charity. Regards, Viv
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February 23, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Yes, many times so true, thank you Viv :)
Meade Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 5:22 PM
yes, and the tears have held smiles. Nicely done. 7
Ebbs Avatar
February 23, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Thank You David :)
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February 22, 2015 at 4:53 PM
Very nice pen Ed! I enjoyed your haiku, my dear friend. A 7 from me!I wish you a very lovely evening! In his light! God bless you! :) D
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February 23, 2015 at 7:47 AM
Thank you Dorian...the weather in Oregon, unlike the rest of the county was beautiful this weekend :)
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 2:53 PM
Oh so true Ed :-)Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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February 23, 2015 at 7:45 AM
Thanks Jan, Always :)
Manassian Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 2:45 PM
So true. Lovely write....We never know what hides behind a smile. Thank you for sharing...
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February 23, 2015 at 7:45 AM
Thank You Eileen :)
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