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Before Your Sun Speaks

Pebbles of dust filter the night awakened, I am last birch embers linger and in your glow I bask Before your sun the touch of bodies warm senses pushed to old cover ancient cracks Glide elegantly with my water as I slide deep into your soul fill up my basket of emptiness where life has taken toll Etch your name into my memories For I will do the same

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/28/2017 2:12:00 PM

Tender expressions of love written w/grace and deep reflection, Tim. Great line ... etch your name into my memories. Exceptional poetry! Love and peace.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/27/2017 10:07:00 AM

such a hopeful, lilting melody, tim... it's a greeat day!..huggs

Jean Murray

Date: 7/26/2017 3:12:00 PM

So sensual Tim. I see solace.

Darren White

Date: 7/26/2017 1:02:00 PM

What a beautiful poem.... again! Wonderful my friend

Dean Wood

Date: 7/26/2017 9:50:00 AM

Tim this poem is so rich! Beautiful lines everywhere. "fill up my basket of emptiness where life has taken toll". A lovely romantic piece of work! Really enjoyed this. - Dean

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/26/2017 8:43:00 AM

Heavenly writing! So poetically romantic! A work of art , indeed my friend, Tim!

Lin Lane

Date: 7/26/2017 7:43:00 AM

Basking in the glow of love...yes, that a thought to make me sigh.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/26/2017 5:56:00 AM

I like the fill up my basket of emptiness and etch your name into my memories for I will do the same. Great ending there! :)