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Before You Go

Before you go Teach me your ways How like a child you lust For life and play and joy Before you go Show me how much love Is in one breath And one caress Before you go AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on October 15, 2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/17/2018 11:12:00 AM

Whoa! Stick around! Stay! … Sublime message, eloquently penned! Kudos, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/17/2018 11:25:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon. Much appreciated.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/16/2018 3:22:00 PM

That's a lovely, romantic piece of poetry.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 3:29:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, ML.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/16/2018 10:42:00 AM

One breath and one caress before you go. Beautiful write, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 11:57:00 AM

Thank you, Caren, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Barry Stebbings

Date: 10/16/2018 10:18:00 AM

Very nice, Line. I feel a sadness but also of expected loss. Poignant. // Barry

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 11:57:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Barry.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/16/2018 6:52:00 AM

Beautiful, and tinged with so much sadness. Hugs, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 7:15:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Agnes.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 10/16/2018 2:54:00 AM

I hope that is something I do every day. Nice poem

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/16/2018 5:23:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/15/2018 9:12:00 PM

Very nice, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2018 9:48:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Kim.