Notes About The Poem

Before you find your rainbow.

Before You Find Your Rainbow You Need A Bit Of Rain

When this troubled world 
Gets you down so much
And you feel you need 
Someone to listen 
Loving arms for sanctuary
And a loving touch

It's hard to keep your balance
In such an unbalanced place
How can people not go crazy
In a world that's insane

You go around in circles
Tied to a wheel
Reaching dead ends
The walls feel as if they are closing in
You carry such a heavy load
You need some help from your friends

How you wish you could drop your heavy load
And trouble somewhere on a distant shore
So the waves of stormy weather
Wash over you no more

You iron out the wrinkles
That caused so much pain
You can at last see the light at the end of the tunnel
Getting ever near
Again

So eventually, you get your act together that's
If you can again
When the world's fell apart around you

Just remember you are not the only one
And everyone has troubles
Some are even worse off than you
We are here for such a short time
You take the stage one moment, and then suddenly you are gone

How can anyone understand you
If you can't even understand yourself
T Life is a series of stepping stones
Sometimes you make it to the next step
Other times you fall between it can make you blue

If you fall it doesn't mean you failed
You  are just human like everyone else
We all fall sometimes
You either have a comfortable bed
Or a bed of nails

People only see what they want to see
And believe what they want to believe
What they want is sometimes
Right is right at the end of their nose
They go in the wrong direction wherever that may be

Searching for an elusive rainbow 
With it's pot of gold at the end
Just remember before you find your rainbow
There needs to be a little rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 6:51 PM
I just love the message of the title and the poem, Peter. And now I see it's POTD. Must have rained that morning, eh? Congrats, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 5:44 AM
I love this, Peter! A great bit of advice! Congratulations on POTD!
Dome Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 6:02 AM
Hey Kim.Thank you so much. Always nice to see the sun again. How are you keeping? You're bso kind. Have geat weekend. Pete.
Anaya Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 5:01 PM
Beautiful last stanza, ah is it a St Paddy's Day-spirited poem, with the longest title ever! Congratulations on your POTD Peter Dome! Lovely ~I Am Anaya
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 5:13 PM
Thank you so much.A pleasure to hear from you.Glad you enjoyed it. Take care, Pete.
Nicole Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 2:47 PM
When moments are beyond our control, we reflect on those we're able to hold onto. At least we should. After those storms, (trials in life) a rainbow does appear. It's nice having some sunshine after the rain. Your thoughts hold so much truth, Peter. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 5:22 PM
Hi Brandy. Such kind words. I'm so grateful. Thank you so much. Stay safe. Pete.
M  Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 2:18 PM
Aww this is just lovely Peter! Full of wisdom and sage advice written beautifully! Congrats on POTD…Debx
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 5:15 PM
Hi Deb. Thank you once again. Too kind loving your poems. I favourited one well done. Pete.
Sands Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations for this great POTD. I am sure many people can relate to this :)
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 12:36 PM
Thank you so much, Hedi. means a lot, you write beautifully. Take care, Pete.
Kaufman Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 9:01 AM
Dear Peter, A hearty congratulations on this well composed POTD. It felt whimsical to me and a touch of Irish. The proximity to St. Paddy's Day and the rainbow reference? Blessings to you and enjoy your honor!
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 5:20 PM
Thank you my friend. It was a welcomed surprise. your words made my day, Kind best wishes Pete.
Baker Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 8:56 AM
Avery strong poem, Peter. I hope it is a help to many that feel they're the only ones going through the feelings of chaos. Congratulations on your POTD honor! Enjoy your day of recognition. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 1:07 PM
Hi Bill. Texas wow.I love American.s and country songs. Thank you so much for such kind words. Yes sometimes I write to help others. Take care. Pete.
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March 19, 2024 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A powerful/wonderful write with a great ending. For years I have said, I am living in a crazy world & it is getting crazier with each new day. Where will it all end? Have a blessed day writing away..........................
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 1:21 PM
Hi Paula. So nice to meet you. I agree. Soon God will have his day. It has been foretold thousands of years ago. Everything is happening as it says. Just a little longer, and the earth will become a paradise. Where war suffering, hate and death will be no more. Pete.
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March 19, 2024 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations on POTD, a poem to get one to seek within, the world in a whole is the exact way it should be, the light has come, God tried over and over but the world loves darkness, sad really how most will have to hit rock bottom before seeking God, but there is where the Spirit shall be, to breathe in a fresh new life, ??Psalm 51:17 KJVAAE?? [17] The sacrifices of God are a broken spirit: a broken and a contrite heart, O God, thou wilt not despise.
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 1:32 PM
Hi Stephan. So true. Man cannot fix things but only God can. Second Timothy verses 1 to 3. Thank you. Take care. Pete.
Fowler Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 7:56 AM
Hey Pete. Love this POTD, especially "...People only see what they want to see And believe what they want to believe..." You know there are at least three sides to every story: yours, mine, and the way it really is. LOL Congratulations! :)
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 1:37 PM
Hi Linda. Always a please thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it. Pete.
Greenhough Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 7:49 AM
This is a poem encapsulated with positive thoughts. Congratulations on the POTD.
Empress Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 5:21 AM
What a deep and heartfelt poem this is, and flows also with soulful reminders, ones that many would appreciate, sometimes when we drown we forget that we are not alone. Every stanza in this speaks to my soul but the ending hits the strongest.” Searching for an elusive rainbow With it's pot of gold at the end Just remember before you find your rainbow There needs to be a little rain.” So profound! I love it! Congratulations on receiving POTD. Pleasure reading this.a fave it is for me
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 1:41 PM
What can I say but thank you so much. I'm touched by your kind words. Pete.
Williams Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 5:18 AM
'Searching for an elusive rainbow With it's pot of gold at the end Just remember before you find your rainbow There needs to be a little rain'. A wonderful poem filled with great advice, Peter. I, for one, shall take it on board. Congratulations on your POTD, so well deserved...Hugs
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 1:43 PM
Hi Maria. Can't thank you enough. Hope you are okay. What wonderful kind compliments. Take care. Pete.
Rodgers Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:53 AM
Dear Peter, I loved how you beautifully captured the essence of life's struggles and the journey towards finding peace and understanding. It echoes the universal truth that before we can experience joy, we must weather the storms of life. I liked how your words offer peace and amidst the chaos, we are not alone. Peter, Congrats getting POTD, and what a wonderful reflection on the human spirit. Blessings, Daniel
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 1:47 PM
Daniel. What wonderful things you say. It was such a surprise I got this morning. Thank you. Stay safe Pete
Puddifoot Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:49 AM
problem is, in our case it's usually a deluge! lol congrats on your potd anyway :)
Puddifoot Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:58 AM
my comment should tell you how i'm doing ;) yeah maybe, wherever 'there' is, i've yet to fathom it
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:52 AM
Hi Charlotte. How are you doing? I agree, Maybe we'll get there one day. Thank you.Pete.
Kitchin Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:11 AM
Peter, a wonderful poem, hope we all can find our rainbow, congratulations on POTD.
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:25 AM
Hi Tania. Always loved that name by the way. Good to hear from you, Thank you so much. Hope you found yours Pete.
Bowring Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 2:35 AM
Many congratulations on POTD Peter with this very thoughtful, reflective read. So much truth within its poetic lines. Love the last stanza especially. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :):)
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:30 AM
Thank you so much, Christina.Made my day. Much appreciated. Take care. Pete.
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 2:24 AM
- Back to the rainbow ... congrats on your p.o.t.d, Peter :) - Enjoy the day :) - hugs
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:31 AM
H,i my friend. How are you doing? Thank you so much. A lovely surprise this morning. Thank you. Pete.
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March 19, 2024 at 1:32 AM
Peter, a marvellous write of a troubled soul waiting for their sky of gold. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:33 AM
Hi, Beryl. So kind of you to stop by. Much appreciated. Thank you so much. Pete.
Jones Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 12:50 AM
What a deep and powerful message! Congratulations on your potd !
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:36 AM
Thank you, Karen.Hope you are OK. I am surprised. Have a lovely day, or night Bless. Pete.
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 12:39 AM
An uplifting verse Peter, the sun will always shine again. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 4:37 AM
Hi Tom. Nice to hear from you again. Hope you are OK. Thank you so much. Pete.
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March 18, 2024 at 3:26 PM
Hello Pete, Wow! I love this poem. I am making this poem my fav. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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April 10, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Hello Pete, i read this poem again. I noticed that you got POTD congratulations. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 9:48 AM
Hello Pete, Thank you for the lovely comment. I am so happy to meet you. Your welcome. I am glad to make your day bright. /Darlene/
Dome Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 3:42 PM
Darlene, you are so sweet and a privilege to meet. Thank you so much dear one. It means so much to me. God bless. Pete. Made my day.
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 1:23 PM
- A lovely poem with words of truth, Peter - (I don't believe on the pot of gold at the end of the rainbow...I've looked for it many times :))) - hugs
Dome Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 2:36 PM
Awe. You can't find it because I found it First. Thank you. Have a great week. Pete. Hope you find your own soon.
Lane Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 8:15 AM
Hi Pete. Your fine lines remind me of the saying, "Into every life some rain must fall." The connotation is that rain is not a good thing, but that's simply not true. Without it, so many beautiful things would perish. We have to weather the worst of storms, for when they move on we're left with wondrous bounty. Loved your verses!
Dome Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 2:27 PM
Hi Lin. How nice to meet you Thank you so, much. I really appreciate you coming by. Glad you liked it. So true what you said. Take care Pete.
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