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Beauty's Come Calling

Perfume permeates August evening air, Summer's abloom within night's shadow, Deep purple gloom basks in moonlight, And twinkling stars consume the skies, Beauty eternally stalks night's room. written on 11/8/2021 For: Something Beautiful 5 line rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: charles messina

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Date: 11/12/2021 10:48:00 PM
I feel beauty stalking not in night's room alone, but everywhere! Lovely penning friend !
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/13/2021 10:55:00 AM
Thank you for your words of delight. Blessings.
Date: 11/12/2021 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful evening with twinkling stars story/write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 11/11/2021 4:08:00 PM
Congrats on this much deserved win. I can almost smell the beauty.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/11/2021 5:28:00 PM
Thank you for your kind thoughts, Karen.
Date: 11/11/2021 2:57:00 PM
Such a lovely poem, Evelyn. There's something magical about the stars twinkling. Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/11/2021 5:33:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind thoughts and good wishes, Charlie. Your contest was highly enjoyable. Hugs Evelyn
Date: 11/11/2021 10:20:00 AM
Oh Evelyn, this is just lovely - "deep purple gloom basks in the moonlight." Every line is so richly descriptive. I feel like I am sitting with you in this serene summer scene. Congratulations on your win. Love your inventive rhyme scheme! I think this is such a fun format! Sending you all the blessings of the season!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/11/2021 11:10:00 AM
Your remarks are so much appreciated, Sam. Thank you for your kind compliments and congratulations. I am sending holiday blessings your way as well, Evelyn :)
Date: 11/9/2021 7:28:00 PM
Sensuous stalker, that beauty! Lovely penning, Evelyn. ~ gw
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/9/2021 10:23:00 PM
She's a stalker no one minds having around. Thank you very much, Gershon. :)
Date: 11/9/2021 1:47:00 AM
Beauty has called and what a lovely poetry you write.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/9/2021 8:01:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed her visit. Thank you. :)

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